the tornado

the tornado

this is about a girl who gets stuck inside of an tornado, hop you like it! :)

published on November 10, 201544 reads 9 readers 9 not completed
Chapter 1.

it's coming

The towering skyscraper collapsed into the earth causing a dominos of chaos. One by one, buildings collided with each other as thunder struck and the ground cracked. Right in the distance, a large cloud of dust and air began to form slowly transitioning into a monstrous tornado. It felt like all hell had been loose. People were running for their lives while some occasionally getting tossed around by the heavy wind like toys being thrown around by an outraged child.
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Shadow_Akira
//The story's amazing! I loved reading it! ^-^ I'm sure your teacher will love reading your essay as much as I did!
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foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin omg thanks! i hope the teacher liked it as well. but it's a little bit short to be a narrative so yea

and thanks for liking it
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foreverinpink
thank you guys!
ut was actually meant to be a narrative essay i had to submit at school, so i just published it on qfeast
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foreverinpink
@kittenlover101 thanks
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on November 11, 2015
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Dauntless_Demigod
Great story
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foreverinpink
thanks
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foreverinpink
@PiperMcLean4
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Dauntless_Demigod
no prob
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