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A tomboy named Skylar breaks up with her stupid boyfriend Jay, When she breaks up she gets to live her life how she wants, it goes a different way, almost every dream of hers comes true. Fight and fight all night and day for a team on her own. A murder? A 20 year old girl? There is a chance her dream will become a nightmare, or go how she wants. The story is not done! I'm putting it up for ppl to read and say what to add! (BLOOD WARNING! NOT FOR KIDS UNDER THE AGE OF 10!)

published on May 20, 201516 reads 10 readers 2 not completed
Chapter 1.
My first murder....

My first murder....

"I don't know why you are so mean to me lately! I thought you liked me?" said Skylar while fighting with her boyfriend Jay. "Well 20 year old b****! *slaps across face at Skylar* "That's what you get idiot!" Jay replied with a smack on Skylar's face. "F*** you! You know what??!! I'm out of here!" yelled Skylar back at Jay while he grabs her arm and twists it. "OUCH!! WHAT THE F*** IS WRONG WITH YOU?!" screamed Skylar. "What's wrong with you huh??" said Jay in confidence while Skylar is on the floor in pain. Skylar gets up and gives Jay an arm lock and kicks him in the back of the knee making it pop.

"Ouch! That hurts so badly!!" said Jay while he grabs Skylar's ankle and takes her down. "Hmm ow. You asked for it..." *goes to room and back with a steel sword from the mines, it's already bloody* "Wait wait! Are you going to kill me? I'm sorry!! For all that pain a caused!!" screamed Jay like a girl. "You deserve it... All of that pain and bruises... You have caused, I can't take you and me any-more.... We are over mother f***er!!" yelled Skylar with the sword above his chest to the air. She stabbed him with a freshly sharpened steel sword with lead for the poison, just in case if he lives. Blood everywhere and the bloody gushing out of his chest and body. "You will never come back..." said Skylar in a scary voice as possible.
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Comments (2)

the story cant be finished my friend lost her account so she cant finish it
on July 21, 2015
I only put this up for the ppl to tell me what to add! no haters!
on May 20, 2015