My Fan Characters (1)

My Fan Characters (1)

I have allot, like, ALLOT. I'll try to get some on here, for save keeping I guess? I would like it I feel you can judge them, to make them better?

published on December 24, 201616 reads 8 readers 0 not completed
Chapter 1.
Breach Emmerld

Breach Emmerld

Name: Breach Emmerld
Nickname: Breach, Em
Species: Hedgehog
Date/of/birth: 1848, July 09
Age: 19
Powers/Abilities/Weapon(s): no weapons, super speed, chaos power
Weaknesses: very clumsy, bad amnesia, very forgetful, doesn't know how to work/control her chaos power nor her speed, phobia of the dark and being alone
Likes: sweet foods, soft/nice textures, technology, her friends, learning, adventures
Dislikes: being alone, the dark, onions, spicy foods, sometimes her powers, headaches
Personality: absent minded, very clueless/oblivious, clumsy, caring, blank sometimes, weak
Bio: She doesn't remember but, she used to be one of the early guardians of the Master Emerald. Her name used to be Enid Kake, a regular echidna. She didn't have a hard life, she was happy but stayed by the Emerald at all times. Lonely, a bit but her companions would come by and visit. She fought some bad guys who were trying to steal her precious gem. Until, one powerful möbian knocked her off of her shrine, she desperately fought trying to win; But a strike to the torso knocked her out of life. She thought she had died, but Breach woke up in place only made of green. She was confused, pondered around she found an orange echidna. Learned her name was Takial, she also learned she's been asleep for a very longing time. A few years inside this Emerald has gotten boring, and lonely. Her sweet friend had left, don't know where, don't know when, and don't know how... she felt a disturbance in her. She started to change species and looks. A Emerald green hedgehog, with piercing blue eyes. /lil pop in, I decided that she's the reason why scourge has that scar on his chest, when he used the Emerald to give him a pick me up. His eye color and his fur color switched which made breach look like a female version of himself. Then she gave him a lil mark form her. Remember when she was struck in the chest? Yeah she had a scar on her torso and so on so furth/ the transformation hurt. She stayed there, on her hands and knees. Panting, all the sudden her one of her hands went through the ground and grasped something. Whatever it was it pulled her, she went blind and her senses scrambles. Her head was pounding, she wobbled and went unconscious. Then... she woke up on a couch... remebering nothing
love interest: none, she doesn't know what love means
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