Once There Was A War

Once There Was A War

The planes flew by. I was scared. Well not scared. More like terrified. They dropped bombs like madmen. All I coul here were explosions, and all I could think if were my parents, who had not yet returned home.

published on August 02, 201635 reads 10 readers 19 not completed
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Chapter 2.

The Little Black Face

She looked so innocent, so special. So precious. But all there was left, was a little black face. I could see the terror in her, even though there were no facial features, in fact, the little face looked more like a football then it did a face. I fell to the ground. Crying. She was dead, unable to make it to the shelters. Such an innocent thing. Destroyed. That's what they do. They take something you love. Something so precious. They take the last sweet thing you have and rip it up. There would be no joy, no happiness. It would all be gone. All because of one word. Hate. No one could find an ounce of love in their hearts. They have to make you suffer. Take the way they suffered, multiply it by millions, then make you suffer that. They would come out if nowhere, with no notice. The only thing that would give you an ounce of hope were thos three words. Everything is okay.
In some ways those words lied. They would say everything's okay. But it's really not. Sure the planes were gone, but what was waiting on the surface was truly terrifying, something so scarring, that no one should see. Something that no one should do.
But hatred full this world now, and nothing would survive, that was sure. Nothing would be okay. And it never will be. It wouldn't feel right if it did. And there would never be forgiveness. No forgiveness for what they had done. Forgiveness for what we have done. No forgiveness for anything. This world was destroyed. I looked down once again at the little black face. I put my head about an inch away from he head and whispered "I'm sorry"
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Hanuel
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the story was updated
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on August 28, 2016
Hanuel
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I just updated if you would like to read
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Septic._.Fan
Yuuuuuuuuuuuss can't wait to read!!!
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Septic._.Fan
@The_Bright_Side Okie dokie ??
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on August 25, 2016
Hanuel
Thanks so much... Honestly I'm making this up as I actually write it. I am going to publish more... I can't leave it like that! Trust me, I'm a fangirl, I know pain. I will be publishing lots more I just don't know when or how often. But I will be sure to let you know when I update it @Battling_Life
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on August 23, 2016
Septic._.Fan
OH MY GODS THAT WAS SO GREAT IT REMINDS ME OF THIS SERIES OF BOOKS CALLED THE 39 CLUES! Just one question,: Are you gonna add more? You should get this published, it's really good!!
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on August 23, 2016
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on August 23, 2016
SlugcatSeagullAghase
Yay! Okay!!
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
No problem!!
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on August 23, 2016
Hanuel
Thanks
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on August 23, 2016
SlugcatSeagullAghase
PLOT TWIST! I LIKE IT!!
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on August 23, 2016
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on August 23, 2016
SlugcatSeagullAghase
(Omf this is really good!! Please, please write more!!!)
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Hanuel
I just updated if you want to read it
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on August 04, 2016
Hanuel
I will
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on August 04, 2016
Septic._.Fan
Oml!!! This was SOOO good!! You had me hooked. Are you gonna add more? :)
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Hanuel
I just updated
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Septic._.Fan
*gasp* yay!
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on August 04, 2016
Hanuel
Ya I am. Thank you soo much for the positive feedback! It made me smile. I will be sure to let you know when I update it :)
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Septic._.Fan
No problem and ok! :D
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