Darkness Falls (1)

Darkness Falls (1)

Skittle Aradito has a hard life. She has no friends, is hated by everyone and, worst of all, she is bullied by Casper Arterton, the most popular boy in school. Casper thinks he is all that, and tries to make Skittle's life a misery in every way possible, to make her tragic life even more tragic. When she goes to high school, she meets her English teacher, Mr Winter, who helps her through her tragic life. But when changes come to Skittle's life, things take a turn for the worse, and she has to find a way to get through.

published on July 12, 20141063 reads 61 readers 36 completed
Chapter 1.
Please Read Before You Read This Story

Please Read Before You Read This Story

All of this story is an exaggerated version of my own tragic past. A lot of the characters are based on real people. The character Skittle is based on myself. I did lose friends in my past, and they did leave me, but in this story Skittle only loses two friends. I lost four. And I'm NEVER going to do what Skittle does at the end of the story. But it is still based on a true story.

Now I've gotten that over with, enjoy the story, and don't forget to comment and rate and tell me what you think!
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DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
This story made me cry, but it was good. I feel bad for Skittle. And if your life is like that, I feel bad for you. T.T I think Skittle haunts the school now.
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on January 31
LilianaTheTiger
So sad!
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on July 26, 2015
ELINAviolets
This is the scariest and most terrifying story I ever read, the 2 main reasons are that they involved;
school with out friend and with bullies, and cauze it's not fiction so in real life
It's also a awesome story and hope you'll make more stories but with a bit more fiction.
5 stars though ^-^
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on April 09, 2015
Laura_The_Fox
I read it from 9:55 PM to 11:40PM without stopping! It was so amazing!
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Laura_The_Fox
DEFINETALY 5 STARS OR 100!
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on February 12, 2015
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on February 12, 2015
sisaloofafump
This is so sad!! But it's so well written!
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on January 16, 2015
Jeweled_Feather
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Jeweled_Feather
This so much like my life...my entire life was literally just written right here...
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Jeweled_Feather
I know that. We obviously have pretty much the same lives
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on December 22, 2014
McDermottsAngel
But this is my life story. My literal autobiography. I just gave everyone different names.
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on December 22, 2014
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on December 22, 2014
McDermottsAngel
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on December 22, 2014
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on December 22, 2014
evvvie_s
Cr*p, what a lovely bedtime story. I actually cried at one point.
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evvvie_s
Blo*dy hell, your school is generous.
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McDermottsAngel
Not a lot of the time. It's horrific.
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on December 19, 2014
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on December 19, 2014
McDermottsAngel
I can now say that I have written an award-winning story, because Darkness Falls won the story writing competition today and I got a trophy and a trip to meet famous authors.
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sleepysuga
Aww, I'm sorry, i didn't realize that. Well, you deserve better, regardless.
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on April 28, 2015
McDermottsAngel
@PrincessToast

But I don't think you've seen the wall post about what happened on the trip. It was absolutely horrible. The teacher brought 20 other people on the trip who hadn't done anything at all. On the way there in the coach, I was forced to sit in a spare seat in a cramped area next to the door, and everyone else got proper seats, even though I was the See More▼
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on April 26, 2015
sleepysuga
Amazing job. You deserve it.
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on April 26, 2015
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on December 19, 2014
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on December 19, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
...
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McDermottsAngel
Aww. ;_; This is a shortened version of a true story up until I meet Mr Winter, except that nine friends actually left me and a lot more happened before that.
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McDermottsAngel
It's okay. :/
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on October 06, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
I'M SO SORRY!!!!
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
PlzStopFollowingMeThisAccountIsNotInUseThxBby
FINALLY FINISHED! Phew!!! I loveeee it! I found a new bedtime story >.< Though, it was sad :c
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McDermottsAngel
Thanks!
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on August 23, 2014
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on August 23, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Amazing
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McDermottsAngel
Thank you!
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McDermottsAngel
The sequel will take about two months.
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on July 29, 2014
JeweledOwl812
I NEED THE SEQUEL I NEED THE SEQUEL
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on July 29, 2014
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on July 29, 2014
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on July 29, 2014
beeesafe
I just finished. At least someone cared for Skittle!
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McDermottsAngel
Yeah, Skittle is a representation of me and Mr Winter is a representation of my favourite teacher. This story was a true story up until the part where Skittle starts visiting him at breaktime. And glad you enjoyed it!
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on July 14, 2014
beeesafe
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on July 14, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
That was so saddddddddd
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McDermottsAngel
I know.
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 13, 2014
PunkWitchTQuinn
so sad Good work
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on July 13, 2014