New slasher type characters i'm making.

New slasher type characters i'm making.

Due to my friend and I, we decided to do a contest who has a better story.

published on October 24, 20177 reads 3 readers 25 not completed
The main character. (New characters i'm making for a slasher story.) (This took forever to make)

The main character. (New characters i'm making for a slasher story.) (This took forever to make)

Name: Marianne Chaput
Orientation: French
Age: 16
A girl, of course along with her older brother surviving the attacks the the villain in the story.
Name means: Rebellious hood.


Bio:
Marianne is sort of a emo though a little sweet for one, she likes emo pop, painting, poetry, and makes some of her own art inspired from the things she has interests in. She is introverted which makes her to talk a little less to other people. The reason as to why she became emo was that people around her didn't like the childish, giggly, girly-girl personality that she had, so instead, they bullied her. Her family decided to move to a city in Ohio called Elton "The city of settlements". A calm city with the air smelling like peanut butter and chocolate with a nice smell of the river and soil, the usually stuff you would use your sense of smell for. It was just one night that she heard somewhere, something, crawling at the point where she hears a "innocent" princess walking towards her neighbors as the city started to travel from another realm, her brother and herself started to realize that it was a book that they erased from the family forever, even if they had some royal blood in their tree.
(This has been an introduction to the final girl, (sort of).)




Backstory:
Though born in a rich and wealthy family in 1994, she had always been planned for the queen of France due to her history with her royal family. She din't want it to be like this because she always wanted a normal childhood, not a spoiled one either. It was just one day that in 2006 they then decided to move and keep half of their wealth that  they owned. They reason as why they moved was a tragic accident, something that they never could forgive someone that served the family no wrong but still had a grudge for them, their maid working and so hard and so fast that she was rushing herself to do all the things that she cut her grandpa's hand off with a slice of the kitchen knife she had, Marianne took a peek as her family's maid began to slowly threaten her grandfather to make him the next princess in the family, of course the grandfather declined since that isn't how democracy work. He then looked at Marianne and then came to realize that she needed to make the family run over to the airport in order to escape, once she had gone to her mother and father in their room, she then begged for them to leave. It soon happened after she told them Placide Roux killing her elder as she heard the screams of her grandpa dying, the knife swooshing into his heart, the gruesome stabs, yet a simple thing for the person's name meaning Quiet Red. They then packed their bags as quick as possible along with her brother's suitcase. Her brother, starting wake up soon saw Marianne getting his clothes ready was confused as to what was going on but as the time was almost up, she told her Stewart, "There is no time left to speak and that we must go or else she could get us all." Stewart was still confused and decided that it was some sort of role-play, so she tagged along with her knowing nothing of what was going on. They both packed their bags, ran down the stairs with their parents and grandmother until Placide decided to drag her in before ripping her arm off with the machete, slicing through the arm until it was bleeding and that she decided to chop her head off, while doing that, grandma told her grandchildren before that it safe to go without me, just like your great-grandmother once told me dear that there was a wicked curse on this family before it was too late to tell them, but Marianne wanted the best for her family, to get rid of the curse they had with someone trying to get rid of their family, something that Placide made a deal with the Anti-Christ that she no-longer wanted to due all their dirty work, the only child she like was Marianne, that is why she spared her instead because she saw a terrified look on her face. Something that reminded herself with her mother having tears in her eyes as she was being abused by her father. That was a simple mistake that she let her go, in order to gain power from the devil from himself, Marianne soon saw her turning to dust and then going up to the sky where it was starting to rain blood and some bits of water because this was the same experience that her mother went though along with her father in which they failed to one of the princess' in the family that was erased from their history, that soon made her mad, wanting more of the people to do things that would have harmed her, why you may ask? She made a deal with the devil just like the maid, but along that she most possessed anyone who made the contract to kill the Chaput family until she gets what she wants, to make everyone make their lives an actual living hell. They soon took off, flew to California in the U.S, and made sure that they would be safe. 6 years after the incident, they decided to move again to a town becoming bigger each day in Ohio, Marianne and her brother looked outside while they were eating dinner, they saw a red-eyed crow by the window while they eating, they told their parents that there was a red-eyed crow on the outside of the window, her father spat his drink and then quickly rushed towards all of windows to close of them, this then became a new experience to all of the family as this was never meant to happen, this would be a sign that someone would be kidnapped and murdered in order to make a new slave for "Princess" as they called her, it was obvious that it was going to Marianne as that she was the one that was spared to save the rest of the family.  Now Marianne and her family must fight against the darkness in order to permanently make it become light again, or as Marianne wishes, to get rid of the curse so that they no longer suffered.
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Comments (25)

Yourlocalcatperson
love the effort it took <3 its awesome!
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DrawingLuda
thank you. It was tiring. I'll try to do the rest of the family, along with the background characters that will eventually die.
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on October 25, 2017
Yourlocalcatperson
too bad you couldnt come we had m&m's
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on October 25, 2017
Yourlocalcatperson
so thats the problem
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DrawingLuda
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DrawingLuda
Another reason as to why I need to rest
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on October 25, 2017
DrawingLuda
In the end, they are going to use this thing to cut my cast off.
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on October 25, 2017
Yourlocalcatperson
wow thats cool
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on October 25, 2017
DrawingLuda
Yeah, I got a new cast yesterday, it's blue.
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Yourlocalcatperson
oh really?
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on October 25, 2017
DrawingLuda
GODDAMMIT!
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on October 25, 2017
DrawingLuda
Me and my mom overslept
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Yourlocalcatperson
why arent you at school?
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on October 25, 2017
DrawingLuda
They will, it needs to happen in the plot.
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on October 25, 2017
Yourlocalcatperson
the background character die??
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Yourlocalcatperson
Im still working on mine
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DrawingLuda
Me to.
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DrawingLuda
I'm done with the backstory. It is big and wordy.
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on October 24, 2017
DrawingLuda
too*
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Yourlocalcatperson
Nice :D
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DrawingLuda
Thank you.
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Yourlocalcatperson
no problem
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