Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 201649 reads 12 readers 10 completed
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Chapter 13.
This is the end

This is the end

I was already depressed I walked around the forest... I kept walking there everyday I sat down on a log the figure sat beside me and said how does it feel to lose ur life... I sat there thinking then I grabbed a knife the only knife that can kill a beast I stabbed myself three times the figure watched then the figure healed me...

I got mad I stood up and tackled the figure and slammed it against all the trees in the woods it grabbed my throat I went beast and I heard something like a bomb then god teleported in front of me. I yelled I have nothing left and feel to my knees. He brought all the people who cares for me I looked at god.. I said u want them to see u get ur ask Whoped god threw me to the ground and hit me with thunder bolts... I rolled over and slammed my head against the ground. I stood up and went beast infinite I picked him up by his throat and slammed him to the ground on his neck the figure kicked me backwards.  

It kneed me in my face the creature started laughing I spit up blood and said let's do this the creature jumped over me and grabbed my neck god started punching me in the ribs then the figure stabbed me with the beast knife and told out my souls all 200'000 I stole and they left and I lays there bleeding out...and died.....
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Tankbeast1271
Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
ikigaii
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
Tankbeast1271
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
sugarcubes
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
U guys want a part two?
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sugarcubes
Ok
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on May 03, 2016
sugarcubes
YES PLEASE!!
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Tankbeast1271
Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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