Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 201649 reads 12 readers 10 completed
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Chapter 11.
It moves with the shadows

It moves with the shadows

I woke up babe was sleep so I made her breakfast.. I brought her breakfast she smiles and kissed me... I kisses back. I looked out the window and laughed.. She said Wats happening. I said its night time we slept all day. She said ok and smiles. I was looking at the city and I looked at some kids at the park. The figure was there....

I watched it.. It was only in the darkness everywhere it went it was in the darkness. The kids didn't see him. But I was watching him. Babe hugged me and said I went silent.. I smiles and said yea I was just looking at this view... I looked back at the figure surprisingly it was still there... But the kids weren't.. I was shocked I started hearing kid screams in my head. Babe wakes Wats wrong. I said idk I hear screams. She closed the window and said how  about now. I smiles and said its gone....

I got back up. Babe asks do I wanna go to the park. I looked at her something was behind her in the shadows of the corners in the room. I said yes and we walked out the room I made sure I was last out we walked to the park and wat in the grass I smiles and said we should go out to eat she said ok and smiles gladly Natasha was at her grandmas house.. I took babe to a fancy restaurant we ate and we had a good time until I looked at an alley and saw the figure it was watching in the shadows...
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Tankbeast1271
Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
ikigaii
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
Tankbeast1271
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
sugarcubes
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
U guys want a part two?
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sugarcubes
Ok
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on May 03, 2016
sugarcubes
YES PLEASE!!
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Tankbeast1271
Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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