Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 201649 reads 12 readers 10 completed
Chapter 1.

The figure

When I was a kid I always saw this figure outside.I told my brother and he didn't believe me.So I ignored it next morning I did the usual brushed my teeth ate breakfast headed to school.But later that night when I got home the figure was outside my window just staring at me..I tryed to move but couldn't so....I yelled my brother name of course he told me stop being a baby and go to sleep.when I focused on the window again it was gone.Next morning I told my mom and dad.

They didn't believe me either so I just thought my mind was playing games on me so I just left it alone.The next night I didn't see the figure not outside not anywhere so I slept great.In the morning it was Saturday so I walked around the house.My mom texted me...mom:we went out to buy your brother some cloths he said someone stole his hoodie...son:ok mom...

I countiued walking around.Of course I over slept I'm tank I love to sleep says in a funny voice. Well its night time and its raining I should call babe...Hears something fall upstairs. Gets bat walks upstairs. The figure pushes me to the ground and runs out the front door I look carefully at the figure.

That's my bro jacket.Runs outside while its raining walks up to jacket on the ground. Picks it up looks around stops at the figure that's far away but I can kinda see it.It has no eyes! Runs in the house and hides for the whole night......
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Tankbeast1271
Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
ikigaii
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
Tankbeast1271
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
sugarcubes
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
Tankbeast1271
U guys want a part two?
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sugarcubes
Ok
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on May 03, 2016
sugarcubes
YES PLEASE!!
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Tankbeast1271
Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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