Don't Want To Go Back (Reader X Various)

You- a human- fall into a mysterious portal that sends you into the sonic universe. You miss your family but the question is, "Do you REALLY want to go back?" The pictures do not belong to me. All the credit for the pictures goes to the original owners. The plot is mine so please don't steal.

published on October 23, 2015248 reads 40 readers 45 not completed
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Don't Want To Go Back (Reader X Various)
Chapter 2.
Three Hedgehogs, Three New Friends (Part 1)

Three Hedgehogs, Three New Friends (Part 1)

You groaned as the sunlight beamed down on you. You swore you closed the curtain in your room last night.

"Wakey wakey..." A voice sang.

You groaned again and put the pillow on your face. "Go away, [Brother's Name]..." You mumbled, your voice barely audible.

"[Brother's Name]?" The voice questioned.

You eyes shot open. Does your brother have amnesia? Let me rephrase that. Is this even your brother? You wanted to see who was speaking to you but you were SO lazy. Plus, the bed was so soft and cuddly; you felt like a burrito. Unfortunately, the person (or should I say animal?) didn't notice- or didn't care- that you wanted to sleep; and you felt something poke you. Out of instinct, you jumped and hit whoever poked you in the head.

"Oooow..." The voice whined as it rubbed it's head in pain.

You gasped. "I-I'm sorry! I didn't expect you to poke me like that!" You apologized.

As you examined the voice further, you saw he looked exactly like Silver the hedgehog! No, it couldn't be. Silver the hedgehog is a fictional character, right? Maybe you're hallucinating or something and that whole thing was a dream.

To test your theory, you poked Silver's cheek. He flinched and blushed slightly. "W-What are you doing?" He asked.

You blushed as well and moved your hand to pinch yourself. Nothing but a red mark on your arm.

"So...this isn't a dream?" You thought out loud.

Silver chuckled. "Of course it isn't a dream! I'm real and you're real...I think..." Silver replied.

You giggled. "Of course I'm real! Anyways, where am I?" You asked. Silver gave you a confused look.

"What do you mean? Haven't you always lived in Mobius?" Silver said.

Your eyes widened. First the portal. Then Silver ruined your amazingly comfortable sleep. Now Silver thinks you've always lived in Mobius?! What's next? You're an animal now? You laughed at the last thought and looked down jokingly; unfortunately, your inside joke was ruined when you saw you WERE an animal. You were a/an [Fur Color] [Animal] with [Eye Color] eyes and you wore [Whatever You Want]. Completely taken back by your new form, you screamed. Not like a little squeal. Like you were crying bloody murder or something. Poor Silver wasn't prepared for this and his ears started to bleed (not literally but...). Is this how you would react when you met the others? Silver hoped not...
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD That's what Shadow gets for being to cocky X3
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
*sarcasm* WHAAAAT Shadow's cocky?!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Erm, YEHAH XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
6 more chapters?!?! YUSSSS X3
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Fiendish_Heathen
Can Camille be in the story?
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Of course!
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Fiendish_Heathen
You're welcome.
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Thank you!
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Fiendish_Heathen
Thank you! And great story!
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ChocolerryPOP
Love the story so far @Starrthehedgehog, Complete 10/10
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No prob
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Thank you for your kind words!
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Fiendish_Heathen
AMAZING! ADEQUATE! 10/10!
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Thank you!
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puffypuff
I LOVE THIS MORE :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
@puffypuff I'm making chapter 2 right now!
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puffypuff
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Hmph... &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] *pants* Beat that!
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puffypuff
your on!! &[] [] [] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[]
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Oh yeah! Take this! &[] &[] &[]&[]&[]&[]&[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[]!! HAHA!!
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puffypuff
Gift competition &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] :3
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
I made more gifts for you! Here! &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[]
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puffypuff
Awwww thx here &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] I made gifts to you to :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
&[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] &[] Gifts to you!
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puffypuff
me to X3
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
I'm running out of smiley faces XD
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puffypuff
:D
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puffypuff
:p
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puffypuff
YAY :D
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sapphirethehedgehog
:D love ittttt
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
YAY!! MY FIRST READER!! :D :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Do you want to do it in the PM?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Okie ^.^ here or...?
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
So...do you want to RP? Cause I'm SUPER bored right now...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Heck yeah! X3
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
B) Yup...I'm awesome like that...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Yayyyyy!!!! :D
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
@sapphirethehedgehog I'm making chapter two right now!
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD yayyyy! Also, this is a great intro to,the story!!! I'm into this X3
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