the taken ones.

the taken ones.

this is another scary story and I like making scary stories because they're just fun to do but lets start talking about this story so its about a boy who lost his friend because the newspaper said they would give 2,000 dollars to whoever went inside the old mansion and recorded a video of them exploring the mansion so he thought it was a good idea but he never came back so his friend named gabe went in to get him back

published on November 19, 20160 reads 0 readers 0 not completed

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"come back luke come home" says gabe running to the mansion "i just want you back" "there it is the mansion that took my friend" "wait i see a note" he runs over to the note and reads "we live here we hate it here wont you come and play?" " uh oh looks like they need a friend and thats not gonna be me but i need to find him" he walks in "well no TOO bad" but then the floor breaks! "AHHHHHHH *BAM*.
"woh what happend? huh? someone is screaming O-O WAIT THAT MIGHT BE LUKE" so he gets up and runs over to the singing please be luke please be luke he repetes over and over "oh no thats not luke its cannablisem right there" the girl slowly eats the docter then he sees her head spin over to him "oh no bad choce to stare" she jumps to the ciling "wow just wow" -_- then he runs to find a hideing spot "look a locker what a coincidence!" he gets in the locker and slowly breaths he goes right to his locker and smelles for himbut luckly he smells like sweat and this whole place is like sweat so the girl passes "few i thought i was dead so thank you for sweating!" he gets out WIP
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