Bloodshed

Bloodshed

Marcella Hodgedon lives in the year 3045, where war is a part of everyday life. Her best friend and battle partner, Kev Martin, always stays by her side. The two of them have a collection of "character stones," which are small rocks with key traits or elements carved into them. But war isn't always easy...

published on April 27, 201550 reads 12 readers 16 completed
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Chapter 4.
Over?

Over?

"Kev!" I cry, cradling his head in my arms. His eyes are glazed over. When I shot the enemy, that bang must have covered up the sound of him shooting Kev! I search for the bullet wound. He got shot in the stomach - a certain death.
"Mar-cella.." Kev chokes. Tears pool in my eyes as I grasp his hand and whisper, "Yes?"
Kev coughs up blood. "Hold- hold me, please..." he holds out his other hand, trembling. I let out a sob and grip that, too.
"Kev, please stay with me!" I cry.
Kev shakily grins. "I- I can't stay, Marcella... sorry... I tried to stop them..." With that, he lets out a mighty cough and his body shudders before going limp.
I let out a racking sob and hold my hand over his heart. My breath quickens when I feel a slow, unstable beat. I reach one hand under his back and my other goes under his knees. I heave him up and stagger out the door.
Kya is waiting with a grin. "Thank you for cleaning up the last of the enemies, Marcella!" she exclaims. Her face falls when she sees Kev. I squeeze my eyes shut and hand him to her. She gently puts him in the back of a truck and it drives off. My vision is blurred with tears. "Is he- is he going to be okay?" I ask.
Kya sighs and bites her lip. "Well, he- he could live, I mean, it's not certain that he'll-" I interrupt her. "He won't live, will he?" I manage, my voice cracking.
She shakes her head. That head shake is the saddest thing I have ever seen in my entire life. It is as if my strength leaves me. I collapse right on the ground. Sympathetically, Kya helps me up and we walk towards our camp.
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Grace211
i give it a five
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
Thanks! :D
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Grace211
no problem :)
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on June 18, 2015
Grace211
he died and now i'm on my bed trembleing :((
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on June 18, 2015
threebeltking
love it!
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
Thanks!! :D
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ellotherelove
I love it!
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
:) thanks :D
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vive_la_revolution
5! I love it, pls write more, and explain exactly what the character stones are and why they're important
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GalacticBiRavenclaw
Didn't I explain that in the description?
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vive_la_revolution
No it's great! I really love it I was just wondering what they were for. :D
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on May 04, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw
They fit in certain slots in a special statue thing... idk what they're important for XP I just wanted to write a war story... sorry :( I stink at action/plot
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on May 04, 2015
vive_la_revolution
Yes; I know that they're stones with character traits carved into them; but why are they important? Do they give the people that carry them that particular trait? What do they do?
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Maya_swan
He died!! :(( 5 i give it a 5
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Maya_swan
Idk nut for some reason i am on my bed trembling..:((
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on April 27, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw
I am very good at writing death scenes, for some reason XD do I have a twisted mind? XD XD
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