I told you to smile

this is a real story and after reading this you might wanna keep a camera on all night. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

published on May 17, 201422 reads 18 readers 11 completed

I Told You To Smile

It was the 2nd of January, 2:04 AM. I woke up to a knocking on the door. One knock every 3 seconds. I slipped on my slippers and walked down the stairs. As I walked down, the knocking on the door got faster, almost like a heartbeat. When I got to the door, the knocking stopped, I looked outside and nobody was there.

I went back up to my room and went back to bed, thinking it was just some kids playing a prank. At 4:21 AM I woke up to the front door slamming shut. I jumped, terrified. I looked over at my frosted window to find "smile" written all over it in frost. I grabbed my phone next to me, ready to call 911, only to find a message written on it saying "I told you to smile". I cried and ran for my life running outside.

As soon as I got outside I knocked on my neighbors house across the road. They answered me while I sobbed. They phoned the police. At exactly 5:42, the police came to my neighbors house after an extensive search of my house. They told me there had been no evidence at all of anyone in my house other than me. The message on the window were gone, same with my phone. They told me to get some sleep and advised me to see the doctor about stress and anxiety problems. Screw that. I knew what happened to me was real.

The following evening, after spending the day at my neighbors, I went home. I went up to my bedroom and set up a camera. It was aimed at my bedroom door and my bed. I set it to record and went to sleep. Thankfully, I slept through the night. However, as I watched the footage, I couldn't believe what I saw.

At 3 in the morning, something crawled out from under my bed. It was a completely naked, anorexic man. He stood up and looked at me on the bed. He did so for another hour, not moving at all. Then he moved. He walked over to the camera until his face took up the whole shot. He was extremely pale and  had bulging veins all over his head. His eyes were completely black, with a huge smile on his face. He stared at the camera for another two hours, not blinking, just slightly twisting his head now and again.

After two hours of him staring went past, he walked back over my bed and crawled back under. I skipped the video forward until it showed me getting up and walking over to the camera. The video finished. I was frozen with fear. The video showed him going back under, but not leaving. Whatever it was, it was still there.
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Comments (11)

Dawnstar
Seems unlikely that it is true, but it's a good story. Now I'm stuffing stuff under my bed.
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on September 10
WastingMyLifeOnline
I don't think this is true, but it's pretty creepy anyways.
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on July 30
Hikari_Chan
Can't believe it..is is real. Omg!!
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on July 03
personguything
Sounds like SwizZz broke in your house
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on September 19, 2015
Coveryoureyes
SOMEBODY HOLD ME, IM SCARED D:
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on July 25, 2015
J.Killa
O.O
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on November 06, 2014
Whisker_Queer
Oh my gosh, awesome story!!!
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on September 14, 2014
heardabout.isis
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on May 21, 2014
BlueTurkey
I like how it's detailed.
Is there gunna be another chapter? It seems like a cliff-hanger to me. (;
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on May 17, 2014
kishinsouleater24
Im going to send another true story out here called The Little Girl In The Red Dress
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sparklygirlforever
that was a TRUE story??????? wow, scary!
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on May 17, 2014