Oke, here's sone atvice... : *I really liked that you made the reader more crazy then the creepypasta's, that's originale, but now the creepypasta's aren't crazy, and that's boring (tip: u could watch the Cp's backstories again to refresh their character) *it could hep if they could talk AND do stuff, I'm not saying your way of wrighting isen't readable or anything See More▼ like that, but more people would probably rank it when they can really live in the moment :D
This is just atvice, but this is a awesome story already ^-^
XD thank you for your advice. they are crazy but slenderman has taken interest in the reader that's why I said that you had been seeing people fallowing you as of recent. and Im glad you liked the story so far. at first I thought you where my first hate comment on this story.
*I really liked that you made the reader more crazy then the creepypasta's, that's originale, but now the creepypasta's aren't crazy, and that's boring (tip: u could watch the Cp's backstories again to refresh their character)
*it could hep if they could talk AND do stuff, I'm not saying your way of wrighting isen't readable or anything See More▼ like that, but more people would probably rank it when they can really live in the moment :D
This is just atvice, but this is a awesome story already ^-^
and still if you need my help, you know my username :D