She rocks his world *Manic X reader*

She rocks his world *Manic X reader*

Okay, I'm gonna maybe probably update every now and then but school and my other work will probably get in the way so please be patient and wait for a new chapter

published on November 08, 201563 reads 31 readers 28 not completed
Chapter 1.

The show of his life

/C/F/ = color fur, /H/Q/ = hair/quills, /Y/N/= your name, /S/ = species


  "Uhh Ames?" Said the green hedgehog as Amy and him wait in line but the problem was no one was there but them
"Yea?" She said excitedly
"What time does this concert start?" He said with confusion as he looked around \a tumble weed blew by/
"6:20 why?" She said looking at him
"We are.... 30 minutes early" he said and facepalmed
"Why?" He got scared from Amy grabbing his shirt collar with fury in her eyes
''WHY?! you would'nt be asking that if you HEARD their music'' she shouded but calmed when a few people came in line ''see. people came this early'' Amy stuck her tongue at manic. *sigh* He stuffed his hands in his black/maroon jacket and just faced forward. 10 minutes, 50 mobians showed up. 20 minutes... 100 more mobians. 6:25, there was hundreds more to count \dang, there are alot of mobians here....how could've i missed this band?/

-meanwhile-
the /C/F/ was brushing her /H/Q/, getting ready for the concert. Of course, she had a nerve wrecking chill. A breathe of a /C/F/S/ female came out, she stepped back from her dresser. Looked at herself, the redjacket went perfectly with the jeans she wore, they were midnight black covered with gliming clear diamonds, a few blue/purple bracelets and a choker with a finishing white paint splattered converse. The make-up was light but effective to anyone who even takes a one second glance, she was beautiful. She could already hear the fans screaming for their performance, a last brush and she went out and towards the enlightened stage. The rest of the band was getting their microphones/instruments, when the /C/F/ hand grabbed hold of the portable speaker the first note struck the fans but nothing was louder than the screaming mobians before them, she looked around. the smile of the /S/ shot arrows into the boys hearts all but one, it caught her interest. The green hedgehog only watched the crazed drummer, and everyone else in the band but his gaze frozed to the girl who looked away. the first lyric sang in a pleasing note
~I'm in the business of misery, let's take it from the top
She's got a body like an hourglass that's ticking like a clock
It's a matter of time before we all run out
When I thought he was mine, she caught him by the mouth~

'whoa, shes good.....shes really....beautiful too''

~I waited eight long months
She finally set him free
I told him I couldn't lie, he was the only one for me
Two weeks and we had caught on fire
She's got it out for me, but I wear the biggest smile~

'god hes looking at me, ooo dont mess up over a boy, i dont even know him....but hes really cute..ugh come on /Y/N/ focus!!'

~Whoa~~, well I never meant to brag
But I've gotten what I wanted now
Whoa~~, it was never my intention to brag
To steal it all away from you now
But God does it feel so good
'Cause I got him where I want him now
And if you could then you know you would
'Cause God it just feels so
It just feels so good~

Love was at first sight but the /S/ wont accept it, she never believed in love at first sight, so she pushed the feelings away as she sang the lyrics of the song

~Second chances they don't ever matter, people never change
Once a whore, you're nothing more, I'm sorry that'll never change
And about forgiveness, we're both supposed to have exchanged
I'm sorry honey, I passed out, now look this way

Well there's a million other girls who do it just like you
Looking as innocent as possible to get to who
They want and what they like, it's easy if you do it right
Well I refuse, I refuse, I refuse!

Whoa, well I never meant to brag
But I've gotten what I wanted now
Whoa, it was never my intention to brag
To steal it all away from you now
But God does it feel so good
'Cause I got him where I want him now
And if you could then you know you would
'Cause God it just feels so
It just feels so good

But the hedgehog would'nt let go of the sensation he felt, he never felt this towards anyone before

I watched his wildest dreams come true
Not one of them involving you
Just watch my wildest dreams come true
Not one of them involving

'ooooo hes looking hes still looking me' *blush* 'great now im blushing,good going /Y/N/'

Whoa, well I never meant to brag
But I got him where I want him now

'she blushed, cute'

Whoa, well I never meant to brag
But I've gotten what I wanted now
Whoa, it was never my intention to brag
To steal it all away from you now
But God does it feel so good
'Cause I got him where I want him now
And if you could then you know you would
'Cause God it just feels so
It just feels so good~

the last note ended and she backed away letting one of her band members take away the spotlight. she had to admit she was tired, she took a quick drink of water and ran back out to the crowd who was now holding a panicked white and red/pink hedgehog she snorted and laughed and the others did too. He came back with a few missing things.....i kid with ALOT of missing things. the concert had to delay for a few minutes so the hedgehog could fix himself up, once he went back out the /S/ asked playfully ''hey valentine you sure none of the girls will kiddnap you while your wearing that?''
''oh be quiet /Y/N/'' Valentine snatched the microphone out of the chuckling /Y/N/ and continued the concert

~after the concert~
Manic was about to leave but Amy pulled him back and put a string around his neck. he looked down and saw a back staged pass ''come on! I really want to meet them!!'' she dragged him to the back and the guards her and manics pass and ran into the lounge room. Manic calmly walked in and gazed at the /S/ who was at the snack table then her head turned and they had a stare off...except the gaze between the two was filled with lovestruck....


\song - Misery business by paramore/
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JadeTibleam707
EEEEEEEE *fangirls and passes out*
Jade: *facepalm* aight who's draggin her home this time?
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Russian_Pyromaniac
Haha
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Taylor: SCOURGE I AM SO GOING TO KILL YOU FOR TOUCHIN MY REAR!! 💢💢💢
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Russian_Pyromaniac
wow you read fast XD well im gonna update somewhere this weekend or if im board
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Night! ^-^
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on November 13, 2015
Russian_Pyromaniac
haha well goodnight
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AdorableNatsuDragion
XD yey!
Taylor: I'm best in the Anbu Black Ops for a reason Scourge DO NOT mess with me!
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silvermoon43344
i don't know how to feel, but his is a great story i have seen a lot of them.
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Russian_Pyromaniac
*shrugs* yea
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sapphirethehedgehog
Aww :3
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Russian_Pyromaniac
heh thanks
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Taylor: *fangirly screaming* ... That wasn't me >\\\\\\\\<
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Russian_Pyromaniac
hahaha
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Have fun x3
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Russian_Pyromaniac
haha if so thanks! and if you dont mind im gonna play some agar.io
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Russian_Pyromaniac
you think you can advertise this with your friends?
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AdorableNatsuDragion
My choice is obvious XD
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Russian_Pyromaniac
yea but if i had to choose one it would be scourge
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AdorableNatsuDragion
XD
Manic is my fav too
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Russian_Pyromaniac
i have to admit i fangirled most of time while i was writing this
manic and scoruge are my favorite
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Taylor: *mumble* I wanna kiss him >\\\\\<
Greenstreak: x3
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Russian_Pyromaniac
*smiles*
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Taylor /)\\\\\\\\(\ *le covers blushy face*
Greenstreak: oooooh Captain's fangirling! :3
Taylor: AM NOT!
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Russian_Pyromaniac
*pretends to zip mouth*
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AdorableNatsuDragion
Taylor: u heard nothing! >\\\\\\\>
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