unforbidden love

unforbidden love

a boy dies and yeah sorry i dont feel like putting a description so just read i promise u will love this story

published on March 07, 2013136 reads 33 readers 6 completed
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Chapter 3.
finding out the truth

finding out the truth

ok i admitt it. me , a un natural ghost was in love with a living girl. she was abosolutely every everything to me. i feel like ive known her forever even though she doesnt even know i exist. im always watching after her. today i was finally able to be strong enough to actually follow her to school and no im not a stalker ok? i just care about her. i followed her in the crispy ,cold morning. the snow that dropped on her head made her even more beautiful.
it was kind of akward watching all the kids talking and some even doing pranks on the teacher when she was gone and me,not even being able to communicate. but where did raven go to? i figured since her home class were still in first period she must be in the library. searching through all the rows of books and books all jammed up. kids these days so lazy that they cant even neatly put books back on the shelf. well that lead to me to only one place to search for her..the girls restroom. i didnt want to do it but i guess my heart did because before i knew it i was sniffing up all different scents of perfume. jeez these girls think this perfume actually makes them smell good? it WAY strong. but there was still no one in here except a closed stall. i would have gone in there but even i know not to go on a girls buisness like that so i just waited to see who would appear out of the door.
a crying girl trying to wipe up her tears came out..wait that girl was..raven!? i couldnt believe it she started cutting herself just like i did when i killed myself. no! i couldnt let her accidently end up like me. the words just escaped out of my mouth. the first words i had said in months before i had saw her. "no please dont do it!" her head turned slowly and her eyes looked soo innocent and confused. poor girl.
"huh who said that?" she said wiping her tears away and pulling down her sleeves to cover up her wrist. "umm i did. and well this is kind of hard to explain" aw man how was i going to explain it to her. her mouth dropped open. "w..what are you doing here? you cant be in the girls bathroom!" she shouted trying to keep quite. "wait you can see me?" i asked. "well what do you think that you have super powers to turn invisible? just get out!" "ok look the truth is " i sighed. "what?" she asked trying to get me to go on. "your probably not going to believe me but umm i died a year ago by killing myself in the same house you did. my dad abused me with belts and always attacked me. but ever since you moved in ive been watching you and i understand how you feel but you cant accidently end up like me." i started heading out guessing she would freak out thinking i was phsyco.
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killedbythesketchbook
write more please !!!
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on July 19, 2013
kattie
Really good
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on June 21, 2013
raegan515
thx and im working on it
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on March 16, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
Please write more. This is a REALLY good story.
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on March 16, 2013
Daniela
Please continue the story
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on March 11, 2013
raegan515
this is my first story ever so if u want me to continue making the story please say so and i will publish the rest of it
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on March 07, 2013