Torn Within (Sonic the hedgehog) (2)

Torn Within (Sonic the hedgehog) (2)

well lets recap --> Sonic was talking to Kai about some vampire group called The Vortox and now lets see what happends XD

published on November 06, 201223 reads 20 readers 7 completed
Chapter 5

Chapter 5

Camelle, the leader of the Vortox, was sitting down on her chair in her dining room, eating some soup, but then she heard some footsteps, running footsteps. Just then one of Camelle's housekeeper's opened the door and said "Miss Camelle, there is a man here" "Bring him in" Said Camelle. The housekeeper went back to where she was and Camelle heard some talking. There was a blue and red hedgehog standing there then he started walking toward Camelle and he said " Hello Camelle, my names Zak, and i would love to join your group of vampires." Camelle just laughed and said "Well if you want to join the Vortox, you have to have a special skill ..... what is your skill anyway?" Zak got out his knife and threw it at the glass of water that Camelle was drinking. And it broke in half. The water spilled all over Camelle. Camelle was surprised and then said "well now for 1 your knife spilled my water all over me and 2 that aint no skill, it is hopeless" Zak gotten angry at Camelle and then he was about to attack Camelle but 2 vampires were blocking his way. "Aro, Ben, take him.....and burn him." Aro and Ben started taking him to a cross " NO WAIT I'M SORRY I CAN DO BETTER"yelled Zak but Aro and Ben already putted Zak onto a cross, and burned him to death "AHHHHHHHHH" Zak screamed until he was dead from being burned. "Now it's almost time for us to get Amy's baby and turn it into a vampire then we will rule Mobius" Camelle said to Aro and Ben "But what about Amy?" Aro asked. "We just kill her or turn her into a vampire" Camelle said. All three of them laughed.


Sonic was going to the flower shop to get some flowers for his return to his love "Hey, Drake what flowers should I give to Amy?" Drake was looking around as he said "How about these?". He turned and gave Sonic a pack of blue and pink roses. "Perfect" Sonic said happly. So Sonic and Drake went to by the flowers while Victoria, Kai and Jordan went to Amy's house to check to see if she was there. She was there with Tails, Knuckles and Cosmo. "Well well well if it isn't Kai and his little friends. what do you want?" Knuckles asked. "We ain't here for fighting, we are here to protect Sonic's girlfriend Amy" Kai said. Victoria and Jordan nodded as well. Amy came out and was about to run away but then Cosmo said "I believe them" Everybody was shocked to here about what Cosmo had just said. "Cosmo what are you saying?" Tails asked. "If there saying that they don't wanna fight then we understand and then we can form a truce" Cosmo said. Cosmo walked to Kai and she said "isn't that right?" Kai looked around and then nodded. Just then a blue hedgehog and a black and grey hedgehog came running toward them and then they stopped, Sonic stood there with the flowers that he was giving to Amy and said "Here you go Amy." Amy was about to say thank you but then Amy screamed in pain and then heard a cracking sound, Amy fell down in pain. "AMYY" Sonic caught her before she fell and hurt her self

(uh-oh watts going on with amy and could it be the baby????? O.O find out next time on Torn Within Sonic the hedgehog chapter 6
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MarvinDaHegdehag
CAMELLE IS MY SISTER!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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on July 27, 2015
Emowolfgirl
I don't get y there was a cracking sound...
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on January 11, 2014
AnimeLover999
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on January 07, 2014
AshleyAmbrose
Ha ikr
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on May 02, 2013
dannyphantom101
HAHA LOL SONIC HAS A GF LOLOLOLOLOL
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on May 02, 2013
AshleyAmbrose
lolol XD
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on November 07, 2012
Breezycorner
yAEH!!!!!!!
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on November 06, 2012