Scary Night

Scary Night

Scary night is about a group of friends who go on a trip that was what they thought it was going to the time of there lives but then they get lost in the forest and they have no chocie but to travel through diffrent worlds trying to find there own world

published on February 25, 201336 reads 20 readers 8 not completed
Chapter 1.
The Phone Call

The Phone Call

Ring,ring,ring "get the phone matt" my bud said when the phone started to ring. I did not want to get the phone because I never get phone calls (i live in the bush ) so i told my girlfriend to get the phone. Of course she grabed the phone because she is not scared of anything. "hello" maddie said. "h----e----ll------o" it said in a old lady voice. u won a trip for 4 friends and it at 5:30 am  tomorrow be there". then she hung up the phone. "thats what makes you such a idoit not saying a word when on the phone" said rick (matt's best bud). well sorry if i did not say anything all i heard was we won a trip and its for 4 friends and it is tomorrow at 5:30 am then she hung up. said my girlfriend. what? said sally. (ricks chick).I know right i did not even do a contest did any of you? said maddie. No,No,No. replied all. well they must of got the wrong number. i said. ok then we can just take it anyways. sally said. NO! said maddie. we cant do that she will find out that it was not are winning trip so we half to lie to her and we cant tell anyone that it was not are trip. said maddie. so the next day we all woke up at 2:30 am to get ready and pack are bags. but while we were waiting for her to call back to tell us where it is and how long we will be there (i think we are moving there). but insted of calling  she drove to my house and told us to get in the car. she did not look old she was really hot with her long dress and her hair in a bun but i have a girlriend so i cant go after a diffrent girl.   when she droped us off i seen that it was just a deep dark cave. so i just yelled at her before she left us "i think you brought us to the wrong place". but she drove off. i think she just did not here me yell that she droped us off in the wrong spot. NO THAT IS NOT TRUE!! yelled rick. YOUR ONLY SAYING THAT BECAUSE YOU TRHINK SHE IS HOT! rick said. my girlfriend looked at me with a mad look in her eye (good for me she said nothing)all of this happened rick and sally found a random door. they told us about it they said that if you go in the door that you go in from dissapers and somthing werid gose on in the next room then you half to get to the other door before it is to late. so we went in (stupid us) and like they said the door did dissaper. then the walls started to close in faster and faster we seen the door and got to the other weird room. but when we asked if we where all her we seen that madison was missing! I started to cry and wish that it was me not her because i was the last one out but i think she pushed me for me to live and not her. i cryed but had to move on because the next room was no better. at this point i was thinking that the girl that brought us here was trying to kill us.
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staygold
I'd give it a 5 1/2... Sorry just being honest...
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on February 15, 2015
staygold
Pretty good story, but poor grammar! Sorry, I'm the spelling/grammar Nazi...
I just couldn't follow the whole story, sorry.
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on February 15, 2015
Bubbzei
ok i just got done looking at scary pics for a poll i made, reading scary stories, and taking scary polls and a helicopter just went over my house and it sounded like someone growling...... i scared........
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on January 20, 2014
klovecutie03
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on June 09, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
On a scale 1-10, I would give it a 7 or 8 =) it is good i like it please continue if you can =)
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on February 26, 2013
softcookies2003
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on February 25, 2013
softcookies2003
what is it on a 1 to 10 scale
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on February 25, 2013
evilmonkeyemily
eh pretty good but not great
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on February 25, 2013