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TEH LEGITIMATE STORY THINGYMABOBBY

Within the depths of an eerie timberland, a disoriented, youthful female sprung through the misshapen topiaries cheerfully, seeking the address that had been handed to her along with a dusty letter with stiff wax stamp with the emblem of two hummingbirds, crossing beaks with each other.  Knocking on a great, board entryway, and the turquoise haired girl called out with a sweet tone. “Hello? Is anyone home?” A slight turn of the brass knob caught the child slightly off guard, surprising her when the door flung open to reveal a tall, slim man with piercing, violet eyes and similar hair tied back into a high ponytail to accompany them. The man noticed the muddied knees of the juvenile, shaking his long head at the sight. “Oh my, what have you done to yourself?” Pulling her hood up, blushed face in embarrassment, she refused to reply to that inquiry as she contemplated how that filth got there in the first place. She gave a soft brush to her dirty knees, the crumbles of earth rolling down her bony leg and onto the Vandavasi mat that rested on an ever so slightly dented and raised sandstone floor.
The forced smile that resided on the kid’s face was painted on before the stranger invited her into the suspicious mansion with a welcoming vibe. Immediately after the girl took her first step in this weird abode, two child-like figures burst into the chandelier-lit room.  Their lemon-coloured weave contrasted their red varnish cheeks, pale wooden limbs, body and head. Royal sapphires were delicately placed in the area of eyes that complimented their black and white top hat and clothing that was flawlessly made.
“Welcome...” The female doll said, her dress swaying with her clunky movements, but her male counterpart interrupted her energetic greeting. “…To our mysterious mansion!” Yet again, another enthusiastic intrusion occurred, this time from a woman who appeared to be a maid with hair as green as basil leaves. The maid’s defined lip shape matched her rounded jawline perfectly as she sang loudly and in a warming manner. “Please, help yourself to some tea! I insist on behalf of the master and his daughter.” Her wide grin was almost brighter than the candles that gave the entrance a soft glow, making the young girl feel comfortable and at ease. Entering cautiously and slowly, the child grasped the small teacup of tea handed to her by the violet-haired butler, nodding her head politely to thank him.
Servants, dolls and the single master surrounded the guest with humble intention, chatting amongst themselves as they evaluated her. Even though all the people that resided in this manor were so kind, that one girl with the rose-pink hair sat down the back, giving a salty reaction. Her icy eyes sent frost down the backbone of anyone who stared into them, even if they weren’t attempting to be malicious in any shape or form. The icy-eyed woman gave a cold glare towards the child, no longer making her feel welcome, creating a feeling of loneliness. Although she was surrounded by eleemosynary individuals, that one person radiated an unpleasant vibe.

So, this is all I have at the moment, but there is more to come.

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