The Shadow Hunter

He is the ultimate threat to the Stable Society, but is about to come out of the shadows... for good.

published on April 29, 201465 reads 14 readers 9 not completed
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The Shadow Hunter
Chapter 5.

Predator

GW-M129 cowered behind the cover of several thick vines. The scout drones had marked a target in the trees near him, but had not picked up a definite heat trace; it was up to M129 to find out what was out there. He quietly slid around the vines and towards some fallen trees. If it was a false alarm, then he could finish his patrol and head home; if there was a real threat in those trees, then he could retreat and call in the Butchers. He shuddered; they were actually classified as GW-H, but everyone called them Butchers. And that is what they were: senseless, barbaric creatures that walked into a room, killed everything in that room, and left. The only time they paused before killing someone or something was to reload; some don't even wait for the bullets, they just smash things with the heavy guns. M129 blinked away the thoughts; they may be Butchers, but they were still on his team. Thank Mist. M129 checked his visor for a third time. There was no denying it; something was under that tree. As quietly as he could, M129 crouched under the rustling leaves and peeked at his target.
Crap.
He half-crawled, half-ran to his makeshift cover. The legends were true; the Shadow Hunter was huge compared to a Galaga Warrior. But the legends never told of his raw power: there was a darkness, menacing and deadly, that covered the creature. But was it... sleeping? M129 couldn't believe his luck! He had just sneaked up on the most dangerous creature in the galaxy while it was sleeping. He pressed the com-link button on his helmet. BEEP BEEP COM-LINK ESTABLISHED BEEP BEEP. Crap. M129 didn't have to turn around to know that the Shadow Hunter was awake now.
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mistassassin
Please check out this story's companion novel, "The Rise of Fluffy" ;3
It's reader-influenced, meaning you can vote on how the plot goes, and it also affects this story, the Shadow Hunter
Rise of Fluffy is much more humor-infused, so it's a lighter feeling story than this one :D
Anyway read it ;3 Thanks everyone!
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on May 07, 2015
Benito
X-(:-*:D<3:-O|-):brb::-B:);):x&[]:p:((:">:-&>:):(B)O:-):-c
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mistassassin
.......thanks?
yeah thank chu I think ;3
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on May 07, 2015
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on April 27, 2015
mistassassin
Oh God sorry guys, My drafts were deleted (by a friend on accident), but I have been re-writing like a madman ._.
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on February 25, 2015
mistassassin
The huge update is coming up! :) To keep it interesting, I'm going to release it a chapter at a time. Thanks for reading and hope you guys like the new content B)
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on October 21, 2014
mistassassin
So I've been adding more chapters while I can. It will be a couple days till my computer is sent off and I'm writing as fast as possible :D so please keep reading it and sharing with your friends. Thanks guys!
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on May 08, 2014
mistassassin
Hey guys I have good news and bad news: I won't be on for a few months, my computer is being sent off to be worked on. However, I will finish my story while I'm gone and publish the COMPLETE STORY when I get back. Sorry to leave you hangin but I ran out of time. Bye
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on May 03, 2014
Nightcat
He has a pet called fluffy XD
I keep thinking of shadowhunters as in the mortal instruments :) nice keep going
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on May 02, 2014
minecraft23
Yes please make more
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on May 02, 2014