My other twin

My other twin

Luna and Lorena are twins, but they're exact opposites of themselves. Luna is shy and Lorena is outgoing. Luna loves black and Lorena loves pink. Luna is a loner and Lorena is popular. But there's one thing they have in common. They love to kill.

published on April 28, 201431 reads 12 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.
Where it all happened...

Where it all happened...

Luna

"Sister...?!" I dropped to my knees as a horrid smell clogged my throat. I got to keep going, I thought to myself. I coughed so much I couldn't even keep my balance. The thought of my sister being killed- oh god- Imma throw-up. oh no, someone's coming. I run towards door on my right and hoping it is right. Once I'm in I check for a hiding place. There was TV, closet, couch, and a restroom. I go into the restroom hoping no one would come in. I put my ear into the restroom door. I hear the door open and footsteps. I hear only a few words of 'did you hear? They got a blonde from one of them elite high schools' and ' I think she stills alive-'. The door opens and a man shouts ' The girl got away! She still in the factory. lets go!' All the men leave at once.
She has escaped, thank god, I thought to myself. Once I get out, a hand covered my mouth and I heard 'Luna?' from the stranger. Not a stranger anymore, I turn around to see my sister.
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XxlunargirlxX
awesome!
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on May 15, 2015
Airislexir79
If anyone is reading this please read the untold and tell me what you think, u can only find it on my wall. Thx
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on April 29, 2014
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Thx:3
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on April 28, 2014