Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013333 reads 44 readers 81 not completed
Chapter 1.

Going home from the date

Thunder Dasher: Sugar, can I tell you something?
Sugar pie: What is it sweetie?
Thunder Dasher: When I first met you, I thought you will not be the mare that I was looking for, but you are and I decided....
Sugar pie: What wrong?
Thunder Dasher: I want to Marry you, you are the best mare I ever met.
Sugar pie: Aww, how sweet! I ... I
Thunder Dash: What's wrong Sugar, why are you crying?
Sugar pie: I never had such a stallion be so nice, I love you.
Thunder Dasher: Let's go home, it's getting dark.

The wind whistled hard and Thunder Dasher and Sugar pie was walking home. Something strange and unusual  was in the bushes. With him, he has a saw and walk slowly behind them breathing hard.

Sugar pie: you hear something like some pony is watching us?
Thunder Dasher looked back. But then the pony disappeared.

Thunder Dasher: I don't hear anything or see anything so we're safe.
Unknown: You may think you're safe but you're not! *CREEPY EVIL LAUGH AND CONTINOUS ECHOES*
Thunder Dasher and Sugar pie looks back and panics. But they couldn't escape because a murderer catched them and he is called Chucky the Pony Doll!
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Comments (81)

Kittynip00
Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
Princess_Twilight
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
DragonFireGirl8
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Kittynip00
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
RylieB
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
madison1
:0
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on June 17, 2013
Princess_Twilight
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
Greater_Dog
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
Princess_Twilight
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Kittynip00
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
xKearax
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Beauty784
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
Greater_Dog
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
Greater_Dog
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
Greater_Dog
Yes.
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on March 27, 2013
GangstaKitty
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
Greater_Dog
yes.
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on March 26, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
Greater_Dog
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
Greater_Dog
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Greater_Dog
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
Greater_Dog
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Greater_Dog
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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