Just Breathe

Just Breathe

Just Breathe is a story i'm starting, sorry if it is not in chapters but segments and please excuse my punctuation, spelling etc. Please rate, comment, star and post what you think.

published on December 04, 201258 reads 46 readers 19 completed
Part One of Just Breathe

Part One of Just Breathe

I could feel his hands slowly shifting the bones in my shoulders as he pushed me up against the white walls by the bathroom doors, I moaned in agony as he pressed harder each time I tried to get away.
   "Why? Why Charlie? How can you even think about telling anybody about that?" Screamed Jason, his face so close to me I could smell the quilt he felt about the incident and the stale smell of blood.
   Two police office rushed towards us, pushing their way through the crowd of kids that came to see what was happening.
   "Let go of her and back away slowly and you or no one else will get hurt." One of the police officers said,If i was Jason I would be listening, the officer had a voice that meant business. And the other one just stared as If she could see right through me, with pain in her eyes.
   Jason leaned in closer right as the police officer grabbed him from me, Jason loosened his grip and gently pushed the hair away from my ear and whispered"Charlie,please please don't tell anyone what we did to her,please. He let go of me and followed the officers out. I could see the tears running down his face as i collapsed to the ground and I knew Jason what putting all his trust into me.
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Worthless_Alex_Stlyles
Love it sis
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on April 19, 2013
Gisselle
love it
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on April 10, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
more? maybe? more! just maybe!? MORE!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! U R EXCELENT WRITER!!!!!!
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on April 09, 2013
monstermonster
U gonna be a wrighter some day?
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on April 08, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
I like this =)
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on January 15, 2013
BlueStripedFox
sounds interesting
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on January 13, 2013
eve.dotson.3
(.)(.)
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on December 08, 2012
leprechuan24
good job!
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on December 07, 2012
cheyenne.underdahl
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on December 07, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
that's is EPIC!!!!! XD
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on December 07, 2012
JennyBearie
you guys r awesome
thankz
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on December 07, 2012
invisable
more please?I really like,you did such an amazing job,especially with the dialogue,there wasn't much,but if was powerful and meaningful,way to go JC
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on December 06, 2012
mikycamry
dang!!!!!
thats cool
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on December 05, 2012
KittycatNeisha
more please
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on December 05, 2012
Nobody.07
:O so scary
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on December 05, 2012
JennyBearie
its just part 1 i will have other parts coming soon
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on December 05, 2012
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
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on December 04, 2012
Beauty784
Mystery.
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on December 04, 2012
nj3000
wow that was a good story make more
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on December 04, 2012