Theodore's first job

Theodore's first job

Theodore gets his first job! Please don't judge this is my first time doing this!

published on March 09, 201423 reads 8 readers 2 completed
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Chapter 3.
1:30 pick up

1:30 pick up

It was 1:30 Bernie and Theodore were waiting at the desk with the white frosted cake put into a fancy cake box.
    "When will they be here?" asked Theodore.
    "Soon" She replied
   "Okay" He said. Theodore starred at the door waiting for it to open.
   "This is taking for ever!" Said Theo
   "Just wait they will be here" She said. Moments later the door opened. It was a thin old lady with brown shaggy hair. She wore a white gown with purple flowers.
   "Sorry I was late" She said.
   "It's fine" Said Bernie.
   "Yeah, It's totally fine" said Theodore smiling at the women.
    "Good" Said the old women. Theodore got the box with the cake in it.
    "Here ya go!" Said Theo passing her the silky white cake.
    "Thank you." She said grabbing the cake.
    "I should be going now" she said.
    "Okay, Come again!" said Theo. He watched the lady walk out the door.
    "For a young one you sure got some skills" Said Bernie.
   "Thanks Bernie"
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midnightfox
you are a good writer and if you want me to help you with any writing text me and i willlllll
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