True eyes

You realize your in love with a man with no eyes. His name is Jack. You can't understand why you like him but you try to forget. When suddenly you see the mask gently lifting from his face....

published on February 27, 201489 reads 28 readers 5 completed
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True eyes
Chapter 2.
Your heart pounds

Your heart pounds

You  wake up the next day remember your meeting with Jack. You shiver at the thought of it. Your mom asks, " Are you ok? You look cold." You smile look at her and answer back, " I'm fine mom!" You look out the window only to see Jack. He's not smiling at you, he's bent down eating something red out of the neighbor's dog. You suddenly realize it was his organs. Bloody organs. You scream at the top of your lungs. Your mom runs upstairs, "Honey what happened are you ok!" She looks out the window only finding the ripped open dog. She lays you down in bed, " Honey..Don't go to school today, i'll bring your breakfast." When your mom left you looked outside and Jack was smiling at you with his bloody teeth. You blush again, only to lay back down and wonder why you like him. "Why do I like him.. he eats organs! What am I doing!!" Your mom comes back in, "Honey who are you talking to?" You look around, sit up and respond, "...Myself.." When your mom leaves to go to work you walk outside to get rid of the dead dog, only to find it was already gone. You look around and see Jack cleaning up the blood of your porch. "w-what are you doing!" You yelled across the lawn. He could tell you were angry but he smiled and said, " I'm cleaning up for you!" You blush, the third time you think to yourself. You feel light headed and your vision blurs, all you see is pitch black.
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Emoshadowqueen
I love it you should make another one
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on October 06, 2020
AsianKitty99
Wow gurl jack is mah man
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on March 12, 2014
Bubbzei
fangurl!!! haha im one to FANGURLS UNITE!! HAHA
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on March 12, 2014
AsianKitty99
yah dats right
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on February 28, 2014
Bubbzei
perfect ms. jack!! :P lol oh and i deleted the other story1!!!!
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on February 28, 2014