fallen in

fallen in

a girl is writing a book when she falls into the story she realises it isnt as easy as she thought

published on February 17, 20142 reads 2 readers 2 completed

Fallen in

Brighdie sat at the table watching her fingernails make little moon shaped dents in the wood trying to think of a story to write, " iv'e got it " she exclaimed. She sat down at her computer and started typing the words flowed into her head like water in a river, she started out, ' Once upon a time in a land far far away lived a young maiden named Sophie, her only wish was to one day find the love of her life, but her evil mother would not let her go out, and would lock her in the cellar with rats and mice if she ever contradicted her, but there was one man she loved with all her heart and that was Joshua, he was but a simple stable boy but had a large heart and was very kind and she was determined to find him ' . At this point brighdie looked at the clock it was 10:30 pm and she was starting to dose off, by 11:00 she was fast asleep and snoring on the sofa with her laptop on her lap. The next morning she woak up to  a cold ground beneath her feet ' must have fallen on the floor .... again ' she thought to herself , it was pitch black she sat up thinking what might have happened but she couldn't remember just then the door swung open, this must be a dream she thought to herself because stood in the way of the door was the evil mother from her stories. "GET UP!!!" she screamed brighdie she stood up so fast she felt dizzy, she could feel her mouth opening and closing trying to get some sort of noise out of her mouth but it felt as if her mouth was full of sand and was unable to speak the woman from her stories threw a metal bucket at her with a brown hard Brusseled brush "start scrubbing!!!!" she screeched, brighdie just nodded as she was still unable to get any words out she walked up the stairs when she noticed a strand of red hair dangling in front of her face she rushed to a mirror and saw she looked exactly like the girl in her story. 'GET HERE NOW' screamed the lady 'am i talking french???!!!!' she screeched ' errrmmmm no? ' brighdie replied 'WELL THEN' screamed the lady  brighdie only gave her stone hard face a quizzical look, brighdie thought for just a second she could see a look of pity on the old woman's face and before she could think about it any more the lady once again screamed 'SCRUBBING', Brighdie knew if she were able to complete the story by getting out and finding Joshua she would get out of this hellish nightmare. When the woman had left the house brighdie searched and searched for a way out eventually she found a loose floor board opened it and slid through when she came to the end of the tunnel she ended up in a market place across from where she was she saw Joshua she ran over an whispered the words 'i have a secret i love you' and she gave him a big lingering kiss and he whispered back 'i have an even bigger secret i love you too' after that Sophie and Joshua were never seen again as they ran away together into the forest. Brighdie woak up with a jolt, she realized it all must have been a dream but from then on she saw Joshua in all of her dreams as if he haunted them
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kitkat01
i was in a bit of a rush
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on February 17, 2014
kitkat01
thanks
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on February 17, 2014