The Broken Hearted Girl

The Broken Hearted Girl

This is based on my life but I'm using other names and it also what I hope for the future

published on February 07, 201426 reads 12 readers 4 not completed
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Chapter 2.

The Break up

''PLEASE STOP IT'' yelled Krista,Jack and Nate were in a rubble on the floor and she couldnt do anything.Jack stood up and walked towards the door ''I hope you know Kris your boyfriends a cheat''said Jack in a solomn voice,''Is it true'' said Krista with tears in her eyes.Nate stormed out Krista knew Jack was telling the truth.
      One month past and Krista was still destroyed,she didnt know how much longer she could live in a  life that was empty where she didnt want to live,Maybe she would be happier dead,she didnt know...She hadn't spoke to Jack or Nate actually she hadn't spoke to anyone. She had ignored many phone calls from Jack,She didn't wasnt to talk to him, to let him treat her like she was a child again telling her he told her so and tha she should listen.
        Jack was worried and had to see Krista she wasn't answering the phone,he knew he had to go and see her,he needed to know if she was okay, she needed a shoulder to lean on a friend.So he left and went straight to Krista's house.
              Krista heard the door bell ring,she didn't want to answer it, she couldn't but her 14 year old brother Mark had no problem not to answer so he answered it
     ''Hey Jack Kris is in her room,shes still really upset,Are you going to cheer her up?'' said Mark Jack replied in a laid back tone ''I can at least try lil buddy''
     At that he walked up the same staircase he had been walking up since he was in dipers,he was worried to see Krista, he didnt want to see her hurt he loved he and seeing her hurting would kill him.He stood outside her white hollow door and stared at the ingraved words on the door saying ''Kris and Jack BFFS 4 EVA'' he let out a long sigh and then knocked lightly on the door...''Go away you cant see me like this'' yelled Krista but Jack walked in anyway.
       Krista was curled up in a chair ''Guess your hearings stopped then?''she said. Jack shrugged his shoulders he couls see Kristas eyes were red and sore he walked over to her and held her arm,she whined as if in pain.Jack got curious and rolled up her sleeve to find at least eighty cut red wounds.Krista shut her eyes and started sobbing she buried her head in Jacks shoulder.''I'm sorry'' she said.Jack cradled her in his arms as if she was a baby.''No one loves me''cried Krista,''You may not know this but you have family and friends who love you and then theres me,Baby I would die for you I love you more than anything your my life,Please be mine?'' said Jack he was proud as he was holding that in for years.Krista started talking but Jack put his finger to he lips and then kissed her softly she smiled and said''I love you too ''
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MockingjayDistrict
Coop story!
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on May 08, 2014
memecutie
Love the story hare who ever this Nate is
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on February 08, 2014
LaurenE6090
Thankyou Its my lfe story so yeah
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on February 07, 2014
qarsoonn
good story:D
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on February 07, 2014