Bro Trouble

Bro Trouble

I've decided I want to do a story! It's nothing fancy, or wonder-tastic, but it'll do. There's also a puzzle to figure out in the end!

published on February 01, 2014109 reads 19 readers 14 completed
Chapter 1.
When it started...

When it started...

Sonic's P.O.V
Monday: I was sitting on a park bench, letting the damp air cool my skin as I take in the scenery. So few days I get moments like this, ever since Eggman's been on an inventing spree. I watch people walk by: on their way home, to work, to the store, to their ordinary lives. How I envy them. Just once- "SONIC!!" I turn my head as Tails' is running towards me. "What's up little bro?" I ask. "Guess what Sonic?" he exclaims with a huge grin on his face, "I just created something really useful!" "Really? What?" I ask worriedly. "A giant battle robot named Fred!" he shouts with joy. "Fred?" I ask. "Something that just popped into my head just now." he answers. "What would we do with a gigantic battle robot?" I ask some more. "It's for those huge robots Eggman makes sometimes. What do you think?" he asks excitedly. "Great work little bro." I answer. He's been going at this all of last week, inventing things that 'help' us. But I don't tell him to stop. It makes him happy. And I can't deprive him of that.
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Comments (14)

Animgame
10/10! I love this story! Keep up the great work!
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SillyPantsJackson
Thank you! But I have made much better stories since this one, and they're much better.
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on September 03, 2015
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on August 30, 2015
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Also tails built alot of inventions so sonic would be pround of him tails sonic is always pround of you your always their for him when he needs you your like a brother to him
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on May 14, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Poor tails im glad tails forgived sonic or sonic would keep begging all day or start crying im so glad tails wouldnt be that mad at sonic. And also like the pics of sonic and tails
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on May 14, 2014
Alexishedgebat
I would dump a bucket of water on Sonic for pay back
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Speedclaw
Well,Tails is very sensitive if you think about it. The worst he would do for pay back is probably punch him...lightly...
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on August 29, 2015
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on February 14, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
I wonder what tails is thinking 4 pay back lol
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on February 13, 2014
Alexishedgebat
If I were Tails I wouldn't go to Sonic
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on February 13, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
aw...poor tails
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on February 08, 2014
Alexishedgebat
That was so mean of Sonic. Tails is my bestie.
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on February 08, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
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on February 03, 2014
SillyPantsJackson
I'm sure he would be very thankful for you saying that.
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on February 03, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
aw poor tails! You are the best part of the game tails (aprat from sonic) you are the cute one that everyone loves and sonics little brother and super smart!
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on February 02, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
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on February 02, 2014