Torn Within (Sonic The Hedgehog)

Torn Within (Sonic The Hedgehog)

Okay, So this is Chapter 3 of my Torn Within Story and i just now found out the name of the baby will be you will find out in the last chapter so.... i will probaby make chapter 4 soon and now lets recap of what happened in Torn Within: Sonic was turned into a vampire by Kai who is also a vampire and Sonic also meets Jordan,Victoria and Drake and now here is chapter 3 XD

published on November 01, 201230 reads 26 readers 11 completed
Chapter 3

Chapter 3

Amy was screaming her head off, and Sonic was covering her mouth so no one can hear. Just then a light came upon them and it was Kai, Victoria, Jordan and Drake. Victoria was holding something that seems like a shot with green liquid inside off it. Kai smirked and said "Good job Sonic, you've done well". Amy was shocked at what was happening. So Amy asked "who are these people?". Sonic was about to say something but he gotten cut off by Kai, "Oh hello Amy, let me interduce myself, my name is Kai the hedgehog. Now Victoria, give me the shot. Victoria handed the shot to Kai and Kai said "Drake, Sonic , pin her down." So Sonic and Drake tried to pin Amy down but Amy was struggling to get free. "Victoria do what your supposed to do" Kai commanded Victoria and Victoria nodded and then said "Where?" Kai pointed to her Amy's right arm. Victoria then putted the green liquid into her arm. Amy started to feel dizzy, her vision blurry and the last thing she saw before she fell asleep, she saw someone grabbed her.


Amy woke up 2 hours later, she was laying down on a bed that wasn't hers, Amy saw a green plant like thing and she said "C-cosmo?" then she heard her name being called, but her vision was still blurry for a second and then she saw Cosmo. Cosmo asked "Hey Amy how are you?" Amy looked around and saw Knuckles and Tails talking to Shadow, and Cream was playing with Cheese. "Where am I?" Amy asked. Cosmo looked around and said "your at Tails's house." Amy started to look for Sonic but she didn't see him anywhere. "Is Sonic here?" Amy asked and Cosmo shook her head no. Shadow looked at Amy and then said "Sonic is with Kai and the rest of the vampires" Amy was shocked to hear this and then asked Knuckles "Is Sonic a vampire too?' Knuckles looked upset and then said "yes he is". Amy started to cry and said "No it ain't true". Knuckles looked upset and looked up, Tails looked like he was about to cry too, and for Shadow, well he was angry, Cream looked at Cosmo and said "Sonic is not nice. He should be taking care of Amy with us". Amy started to worry about her baby, but then she remembered what they did to her and she asked Tails "Tails what was in that shot???" "Well baseically the liquid was vampire blood" Tails said. Amy was worried about her and the baby, Cosmo asked "Could it effect the baby" Tails shook his head and then said "yes it could". Everyone was scared now, even Shadow.


(Uh-oh the baby might be a vampire D: whats going to happened next find out in Chapter 4
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Comments (11)

MarvinDaHegdehag
TASTY!! Moar plz!
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on July 27, 2015
Emowolfgirl
Reminds me if Twilight
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on January 11, 2014
AnimeLover999
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on January 07, 2014
AshleyAmbrose
lolololol
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on November 11, 2012
Nobody.07
lol, it's like "come one Sonamy, it's such a great story, i wanna read more!!" haha
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on November 09, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
ikr and okay XD
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on November 08, 2012
Nobody.07
did you know that you can just add a chapter to the whole story?? the you wouldn't have a bunch of seperate "stories"
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on November 08, 2012
Nobody.07
i know it sounds sadistic liking the pain in fear... but i hate when they are all brave and perfect and invulnerable to pain
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on November 08, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
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on November 02, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
Thank you Leigh07
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on November 02, 2012
Nobody.07
it's almost like twilight-but way better! awesome job!! I LOVE the pain and fear in the heroes!!
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on November 02, 2012