Cinderella

In my story, Cinderella doesn't cry when she's bullied or abused, she doesn't wait for the fairy to help her to the ball, she doesn't easily fall in love with the prince!!! My story is about a Cinderella who fights for her life!! This story is filled with my emotions, optimism and fighting spirit.. it's different and i hope you like it!!!!

published on January 08, 2014101 reads 31 readers 21 not completed
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Cinderella
Chapter 5.
The Prince's personal maid

The Prince's personal maid

"OHHH Kenshi!!" Kenshi stopped in front of the castle. "This is where we're gonna live! You better get used to the stable here for a while." The guards led Kenshi to the stables while i was introduced to the head maid...
"Your name maiden??" said the head maid in a squeaky voice..
"I'm Cinderella"..
"Cinderella of the modern times we have here!" That woman's squeaky voice was irritating and her words made me want to kill her with my scythe.
"So you're gonna be the prince's personal maid! You better last more than a week!" She said these words and left me in front of the prince's room. I took a deep breath, checked my uniform, my black hair was tied properly and i had my dagger tied to my leg (it was hidden by my skirt). I pushed the door, "May I come in Prince Kyle?" .....


The curtains were flying around, the cold breeze was coming from the balcony and i guessed this was where the bait (prince) was. I walked toward the balcony hoping to last more than a week as his personal maid so that i get enough time to meet my family's murderer and hurt his son! A hand grabbed me! It pulled me to the end of the balcony and almost strangled me! I was gasping for breath and was about to be thrown off the balcony and i just couldn't let me be killed here!!! With a double back flip i freed myself from the grip and landed in front of a young man. In front of me stood a guy with skin as smooth and beautiful as a child, eyes as blue as the sky and as cold as the night, and his black hair was a beautiful contrast on his face. I stared in awe at the tall young man about 18 years old...



She isn't what i thought she would be! This new personal maid is interesting! A double back flip? Looks like i'm dealing with no ordinary girl.. She is one of the most beautiful creatures i've ever seen... Red hair so long that it unties till her hips, beautiful icy grey eyes, creamy skin and lips colored as a cherry.. She's nothing like what i've seen before..

"Who are you? My new maid? I thought you were a random stranger barging in to assassinate me!" said Kyle.
"I'm Aki_ i mean Cinderella! Prince Kyle's personal maid" Akira was on her guard and she had not seen the prince before.. The young man gently bent on his knee, took Akira's hand and exclaimed "I didn't know you were my personal maid! It's a pleasure meeting you young maiden! Please forgive my rudeness for attacking you. A Prince must always be on his guard and i didn't hear you come in."
"Prince.. Kyle?" Akira muttered and deep in her heart she was already regretting this encounter...
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vive_la_revolution
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on May 17, 2015
Akane
thanks @CrystalDiamond2323 !! am glad u read it :D really very happy :D thankssss
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CrystalDiamond2323
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write.more!!!!
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on July 14, 2014
Akane
:"> i forgot about his dream.... :"> heheheheheheeeeeeee it's not something to tell here :D
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on April 08, 2014
Nightcat
Yay you punky promised :) LOVE the new chapter ooooohh what was the prince dreaming of???
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on April 08, 2014
Akane
:"> thank u Celesty :">
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on March 12, 2014
Celest_Stories
Love the new chapter Kanny!!
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on March 11, 2014
Akane
:"> thanks!!! i'm looking at my notifications and as soon as i finish i'm heading to your stories ;)
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on February 14, 2014
Celest_Stories
Another Amazing story Kanny!
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on February 13, 2014
Akane
:D okkkkkk :"> thanks!! :D <3
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on February 02, 2014
coolsweeterthanother
pls pls inform me too;)
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on February 02, 2014
Akane
aww so nice!!! thanks coolsweeterthanother and blackcat123 ;) i pinky promise i'll complete it soon and i'll message you when i add new chapters :) thanks for your support!!!!!
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on January 30, 2014
Nightcat
Whoa amazing idea wish it was finished so I could read ita llll
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on January 29, 2014
coolsweeterthanother
Wow:-O I'm a fan of u.u r awesome :)
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on January 29, 2014
Akane
yes!!! i thought of you while writing about Kyle so i thought i should put up Kirito here :D it's a nice pic right???!!!! :D
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on January 23, 2014
Paraboilc
it that picture supposed to be Kirito!!?!?!?!?
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on January 22, 2014
Akane
aww dont worry!!! a few more people to be killed, kill and die and then there's the happily ever after :D lol the sentence sounds like i'm killing everyone :">
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on January 09, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
I. WANT. TO. CRY!!!!!!!!!!! :(( :(( :((
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on January 09, 2014
Akane
:-O:D thanks!! the best part is yet to come!!
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on January 09, 2014
Emowolfgirl
WOW
Better than the fairy tale
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on January 09, 2014