Cinderella

Cinderella

In my story, Cinderella doesn't cry when she's bullied or abused, she doesn't wait for the fairy to help her to the ball, she doesn't easily fall in love with the prince!!! My story is about a Cinderella who fights for her life!! This story is filled with my emotions, optimism and fighting spirit.. it's different and i hope you like it!!!!

published on January 08, 2014108 reads 33 readers 21 not completed
Chapter 1.
Beginning

Beginning

Fights, war, blood, blood lust, swords, armed men.. No one cares who kills or who is killed as long as they and their loved ones are safe. I know who orders everything, i know who causes destruction, i know who killed my family and today i'm setting on a journey to kill him! It all happened 10 years ago.....


I was 7 years old. I loved my family very much and had a 5 year old sister. My parents were not from the rich society but we had enough money to live properly and happily. I cared less about materials, dresses and jewellery unlike my classmates who were already attracted to the materialistic world of the nobles! I only cared for my little sister Saya, she was always so cute with her red braids and cheerful personality, she always had a smile for me until the day she was brutally killed by the King's men! I was sleeping soundly in the room but got awaken by the sound of guns and shouts. Daddy and mommy rushed into the room and got me and Saya out of the bed, hurried to the back door in the kitchen and held our hands tightly. There was smoke and dust everywhere and it filled my eyes. I looked at daddy: he was sweating and i saw his tears. Mommy was strongly holding my hands and had Saya in front of her. Together, we watched our house burn down to ashes, Saya was scared to death, daddy held us all together, mommy was sobbing and i was angry that our house was destroyed!!

Daddy held us tighter and i looked at him, he was staring at those men in shining armor coming towards us with their swords drawn forward. In the next second, daddy was dragged and slayed in front of my eyes. He was bleeding now and i was crying. Saya was trembling and i hid her face in my arms. Mommy was shouting helplessly: "Spare my children!! Pleeease let my children go!!" They dragged mommy by her long, straight and black hair. "Mommy!! Mommy!! Moommmmy," i kept shouting and crying but a muscled man had held me. I could not move, Saya had tears rolling down her cheeks and determination in her eyes but i knew it would be useless. Saya ran to mommy and kicked the man who was holding mommy's hair. "SAYA!!" i shouted but it was too late, she was already stabbed and mommy was already strangled.

It was dark everywhere. I had fainted, the smell of blood flowed to my nose and i tasted blood in my mouth. It tasted awful, my lips were cut maybe when i fell from the man's grip. My hands were almost blue cause they were held tightly. I looked around and saw ashes of our house, daddy's body, mommy's beautiful face and hair covered in mud, Saya's clothes covered in blood. I went to daddy but he was not moving so i hugged him, i went to mommy but she was also not moving so i hugged her, i went to Saya and when i saw she was not smiling i cried and cried and hugged her! I caressed her beautiful red hair and kissed everyone goodbye. I knew my life had changed and that crying over them would not make things better. I looked into the ashes and tried to find belongings i could save but i found nothing except for a white silver ring mommy had.

I walked away, tears in my eyes, pain in my heart, a burden on my shoulders and revenge on my mind... This was the beginning of my new life at 7 years old.
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Lucky_Queen
More!!!
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on May 17, 2015
Akane
thanks @CrystalDiamond2323 !! am glad u read it really very happy thankssss
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write.more!!!!
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on July 14, 2014
Akane
i forgot about his dream.... heheheheheheeeeeeee it's not something to tell here
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on April 08, 2014
Nightcat
Yay you punky promised LOVE the new chapter ooooohh what was the prince dreaming of???
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on April 08, 2014
Akane
thank u Celesty
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on March 12, 2014
Celest_Stories
Love the new chapter Kanny!!
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on March 11, 2014
Akane
thanks!!! i'm looking at my notifications and as soon as i finish i'm heading to your stories
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on February 14, 2014
Celest_Stories
Another Amazing story Kanny!
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on February 13, 2014
Akane
okkkkkk thanks!!
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on February 02, 2014
coolsweeterthanother
pls pls inform me too
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on February 02, 2014
Akane
aww so nice!!! thanks coolsweeterthanother and blackcat123 i pinky promise i'll complete it soon and i'll message you when i add new chapters thanks for your support!!!!!
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on January 30, 2014
Nightcat
Whoa amazing idea wish it was finished so I could read ita llll
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on January 29, 2014
coolsweeterthanother
Wow I'm a fan of u.u r awesome
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on January 29, 2014
Akane
yes!!! i thought of you while writing about Kyle so i thought i should put up Kirito here it's a nice pic right???!!!!
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on January 23, 2014
Parabolic
it that picture supposed to be Kirito!!?!?!?!?
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on January 22, 2014
Akane
aww dont worry!!! a few more people to be killed, kill and die and then there's the happily ever after lol the sentence sounds like i'm killing everyone
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on January 09, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
I. WANT. TO. CRY!!!!!!!!!!!
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on January 09, 2014
Akane
thanks!! the best part is yet to come!!
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on January 09, 2014
Emowolfgirl
WOW
Better than the fairy tale
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on January 09, 2014