The lost spirit

The lost spirit

This story is a bout a girl named star who gets sent away from a concentration camp by one of the gaurds who fell in love with her.Will she get away and make it to free land or be sent back or killed read this story to find out. :D (Hope you like it!)

published on December 16, 201319 reads 11 readers 2 not completed
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Chapter 3.
Authors Note!!!

Authors Note!!!

Hi!!!!

So thanks for reading this story it's kind of based on a story Called I Am David and also If I get 3 comments from 3 different users then I'll make the next chapter By the way any feedback or suggestions i'll be good with I don't care if it isn't positive if your being honest I'm good. This story is being made for @Star_chaser (follow her she is awesome!) So ya hope you like it so far I'll be making another chapter hopefully so ;)on
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madison1
Also camp dachau is an actual place or was i think you can visit there too
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on December 20, 2013
madison1
Thanks I will I decided i would make the hook first to see what you thought then continue to maker the rest
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on December 20, 2013