The lost spirit

The lost spirit

This story is a bout a girl named star who gets sent away from a concentration camp by one of the gaurds who fell in love with her.Will she get away and make it to free land or be sent back or killed read this story to find out. :D (Hope you like it!)

published on December 16, 201324 reads 11 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.

Intro

I'm star I have never seen myself in a mirror so I cant explain what I look like.    
When I was just 7 years old I was sent to a concentration camp in Germany called Dachau.

  
It's a cruel place you NEVER want to be in they give you small amounts of food and no clean water.Everyone of us prisoners live in constant fear of brutal treatment and terror detention including standing cells, floggings, the so-called tree or pole hanging, and standing at attention for extremely long periods of time.I am tough I admit I mean I have seen many deaths and many people being abused  and such things like that.The Guards are cruel and I and others think they have no hearts.My mother was killed and my father....Sent away to I don't know where.My elders around here have taught everyone to speak German so we can understand them and what they are saying. I know what your thinking why don't you just try to escape well lets see....There are barbed wire on top of the fence and they so we call the guards are armed with guns and take no mercy The Dachau Concentration camp is heavily defended and secured to ensure that no prisoners escape. A ten-foot-wide area of ground called "the neutral zone” is around each camp building. This was to mark where prisoners were not to trespass. A four-foot-deep and eight-foot-broad (1.2 × 2.4 m) ditch lay behind the “neutral-zone.” The whole camp is surrounded by ELECTRICALLY charged barbed wire and a wall. On the west side of the wire is a deep canal filled with water not blue like the others say but gray like the rest of the camp, which was connected with the river Amper. When I first got to the camp I had to hand over all my belongings including my cloths  . That's right everyone here is stark naked.There are those who are polish and those who are Jews no matter we all stuck together as one.
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planetfroot
Cool!!
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on December 21, 2013
madison1
Also camp dachau is an actual place or was i think you can visit there too
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on December 20, 2013
madison1
Thanks I will I decided i would make the hook first to see what you thought then continue to maker the rest
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on December 20, 2013
planetfroot
Interesting make more
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on December 20, 2013