She wolf

She wolf

this is about a girl. Shes not normal though she is a werewolf! How will she survive?

published on December 01, 201392 reads 35 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.
The Dark Forest

The Dark Forest

i'm Savannah,
my life is really complicated.  i'm a werewolf.
it all started at my house.
Eric  is my best guy friend.He came over. he said hi i asked how everything was doing with him. Eric is the type of guy who is a dare devil.
we sat beside each other. I asked what he wanted to do now. ''you'll hate me for this but... i was thinking we should go in the dark forest for a walk''. ''WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY''! i said laughing we both laughed after that i decided that would be kinda fun. little did i know that that was crazy to do.

i started feeling uncomfortable  ''its really dark here are you sure we should be here''? he replied:''its fine''! We were walking when i stepped on something squishy, i looked down it was a hand! i screamed 'he quickly  looked at me 'What is it''? i pointed to the ripped hand. I could see fear in his eyes .we started walking faster but the way home.  all of a sudden Eric  froze.  are you ... I looked where he was looking. Big yellow eyes were staring right at us.'' Savannah RUN''! he yelled.   i whispered something in his ear ''stay safe''  hoping it wasn't the last thing i would say. we ran together. the thing  caught me. I struggled for freedom. ''ERIC HELP''!
a tear fell down my dirty cheek.  it bite my waste then black.
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MysticArrow
Awesome, really interesting, punctuation and capitalization and you on your way to New York Times.
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shantimp
well thank you!!
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LilaTheWolf
You should keep on writing this. I think you could be an author and write freakin' sweet short stories.
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shantimp
thank you i'll keep writing
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