Blessings

Blessings

An adventurer with a dark secret(Ali) and a well known warrior bent on revenge(Akari) from a small town called Risenburg and its guild Blessings set out on a journey to kill, Ninshaku, the demon who killed the warrior's family and siblings as the adventurer tags along waiting for the right moment to unleash his secret. With their trusty spirit partners Shadow and Lynx at their side with their fun personalities will lighten the mood on this harsh journey. Shadow isn't much of an animal but he "shadows" the object of his choice. Lynx is a sarcastic and uptight fox who helps by taking control of the enemy. Thanks to @Celest_Stories for helping for this story, she is a very close friend of mine!

published on November 27, 201330 reads 8 readers 2 not completed
Chapter 1.
Ali Enters

Ali Enters

Hi, I'm Ali, I am fifteen years of age with blonde hair and eyes as blue as the night stars with a light gold hue in the middle. I normally wear all black. Black combat boots, black shirt, black leather jacket, and black jeans.
   It was a cold and stormy night with the rain stinging my body and shadow secure in my coat pocket. Shadow is a spirit partner that is sent to a mortal when we are born. We've been on the same road and same scenery for about three miles now and no sign of the town of Risenburg. When suddenly a cold wind rushes by when no one seems to be there, and it starts to snow, out of nowhere, then I see it. The town lights up like a star in the night sky.
   As I enter the town you can hear the people and cars bustling past on the streets and as I enter a quaint little coffee shop I hear rumors about a warrior guild master coming in after, what I believe they said, hunting for a demon. I was intrigued by this notion when they said it was the master demon of hell. They mentioned a building in the middle of town that you couldn't miss, a guild in fact, so I set out to find it.
   I forgot to mention that we all have special abilities that we are born with some read minds see ghosts, time travel, but me... I have the shadows. Always living in darkness, I don't have many friends, but my partner shadow is enough for me.
   I see the building immediately; it looks more like a college than a guild to me but, whatever. I'm just about to knock on the door when I hear screaming and throwing of chairs and tables, but I enter anyways. As I walk I ask "Hello, can anyone help me". Heads turn in wonder... till they realize that they're still fighting. A girl dressed in pink with long white hair skips towards me, waves and says "Hi, I'm Katt, if it wasn't obvious enough." As I stand there confused at what she is saying, I look up and notice two furry, cat-like ears poking out from the top of her head. I jump back in horror without realizing that I might have offended the girl and start to apologize, but she interrupts with "I get that a lot".
   She says she is here to help the students apply for the guild and find the sections of the school we would need to find, so I instinctively follow her deeper inside.
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Celest_Stories
Awesome so far dude!! love it! lol I totally forgot about Katt! Man she is hilarious
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on November 27, 2013
Shine_Stories
Hey guys this is the first chapter of my first story Blessings hope you like it.
With help from Celest_Stories thank you.
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on November 27, 2013