This is the story of how Jeff became a killer

This is the story of how Jeff became a killer

This is not my story I'm just retelling the tale of how Jeff became a brutal murderer! Enjoy

published on November 10, 2013184 reads 46 readers 11 completed
Chapter 1.
The Intro.

The Intro.

After weeks of unexplained murders, the ominous unknown killer is still on the rise. After little evidence has been found, a young boy states that he survived one of the killer's attacks and bravely tells his story.
"I had a bad dream and I woke up in the middle of the night," says the boy, "I saw that for some reason the window was open, even though I remember it being closed before I went to bed. I got up and shut it once more. Afterwards, I simply crawled under my covers and tried to get back to sleep. That's when I had a strange feeling, like someone was watching me. I looked up, and nearly jumped out of my bed. There, in the little ray of light, illuminating from between my curtains, were a pair of two eyes. These weren't regular eyes; they were dark, ominous eyes. They were bordered in black and... just plain out terrified me. That's when I saw his mouth. A long, horrendous smile that made every hair on my body stand up. The figure stood there, watching me. Finally, after what seemed like forever, he said it. A simple phrase, but said in a way only a mad man could speak.

"He said, 'Go To Sleep.' I let out a scream, that's what sent him at me. He pulled up a knife; aiming at my heart. He jumped on top of my bed. I fought him back; I kicked, I punched, I rolled around, trying to knock him off me. That's when my dad busted in. The man threw the knife, it went into my dad's shoulder. The man probably would've finished him off, if one of the neighbors hadn't alerted the police.

"They drove into the parking lot, and ran towards the door. The man turned and ran down the hallway. I heard a smash, like glass breaking. As I came out of my room, I saw the window that was pointing towards the back of my house was broken. I looked out it to see him vanish into the distance. I can tell you one thing, I will never forget that face. Those cold, evil eyes, and that psychotic smile. They will never leave my head."

Police are still on the look for this man. If you see anyone that fits the description in this story, please contact your local police department.
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Comments (11)

DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
Oh. My. God. I don't think I can finish. This is terrible! Poor Jeff!
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on February 23
Bubbzei
another another!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on January 22, 2014
Icekiller46
My life in 5 seconds
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on January 11, 2014
Miatizz22
make another!! Like a sequel or something!
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on December 04, 2013
OneHellOfAButler666
I any fan girls wanna see some nice pics of jeff then check out my pictures
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on November 12, 2013
sandstorm8003
that sounds scary good story
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on November 12, 2013
OneHellOfAButler666
Thanks Mary_chan!
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on November 11, 2013
OneHellOfAButler666
Thanks Alexandriasarous
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on November 11, 2013
Mary_chan
hey i have that same pic for my series! i love it!! keep it up >o<
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on November 10, 2013
OneHellOfAButler666
plus I'm so bored I think I might go insane
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on November 10, 2013
OneHellOfAButler666
I did say I was passing on the story and that it wasn't mine
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on November 10, 2013