Delusions of the Alternates

What started as a traumatic experience for 18-year-old Bri Elaing turned into a dimension disaster! When Bri grabs a mysterious stone, it makes her travel to every universe along with her high school sweetheart she still has a crush on, Brian Sedrew. Will Bri make it home safely and get a happy ending? Or will she get caught and become part of the multiverse

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The Detention Before Death

The Detention Before Death
Bri didn’t argue.

They backed away from the stone altar, careful not to touch the tapes, the photographs, or the cracked white mask resting at the center like an offering.

The forest around them had gone unnaturally still.

No wind.

No insects.

No distant animal calls.

Only the low hiss of static crawling through the air.

Then Bri saw it.

Half-buried beneath the ash bowl was a stone.

It was small enough to fit in her palm, but it looked impossibly heavy. Its surface shimmered with two colors that shouldn’t have blended together so smoothly: deep purple and cold grey. Lines pulsed faintly inside it, like veins of light trapped beneath glass.

Brian noticed her staring.

“Bri,” he warned.

She didn’t move closer. “That wasn’t there before.”

“Then that’s probably a good reason not to touch it.”

The stone pulsed again.

This time, the symbol appeared across its surface.

The circle.

The crossing lines.

The mark of The Operator.

Bri’s breath caught.

Brian saw it too. “Nope. Absolutely not.”

“It’s linked to him,” Bri whispered.

“Exactly. Which means we leave it alone.”

But the stone was calling to her.

Not with words. Not exactly.

It was more like a feeling behind her eyes, a pull in her chest, the same invisible hook she had felt whenever The Operator was nearby.

But this was different.

The Operator’s presence was cold and empty.

The stone felt alive.

Wrong, but alive.

A branch snapped somewhere in the fog.

Brian turned sharply.

A tall black shape stood between the trees.

Too far away to see clearly.

Too close to ignore.

“Bri,” Brian said, voice low. “Move.”

The Operator stepped forward.

The ringing exploded through the clearing.

Bri stumbled, clutching her head.
Brian caught her before she fell, but the moment his hand touched her shoulder, the stone flared bright purple.

The altar cracked.

The tapes scattered.

The mask slid from the stone and hit the ground.

Bri reached out on instinct, not for the mask, but for balance.

Her fingers brushed the glowing stone.

The world folded.

Brian shouted her name, but his voice stretched and distorted, pulled apart by static.

The forest twisted into streaks of black, grey, and violet.
The trees bent inward as if the entire world had become a tunnel.

Bri felt herself falling.

Not down.
Through.

The last thing she saw was The Operator standing beside the altar, its faceless head tilted toward her.

Then the purple light swallowed everything.

Bri hit the floor hard.

Dust erupted around her.

For several seconds, she couldn’t breathe. Her ears rang, her vision swam, and the taste of metal coated her tongue. Somewhere nearby, Brian groaned.

“Brian?” she rasped.

“I’m alive,” he muttered. “I think. Unless hell has school floors.”

Bri pushed herself upright.

They were no longer in the forest.

They were in a hallway.

A school hallway.

Long, dark, and abandoned.

Lockers lined both sides, rusted and dented.

Some hung open, their doors creaking slightly even though there was no wind.

Papers littered the floor, yellowed with age. The ceiling lights flickered weakly, casting everything in a sick purple-grey glow.

Brian sat up beside her, rubbing his shoulder. “Where are we?”

Bri looked around, heart pounding. “Not home.”

At the end of the hall, a sign hung crookedly from the ceiling.

DETENTION BLOCK C.

Underneath it, someone had scratched three words into the wall.

SHE STILL LIVES.

Brian stood slowly. “I hate this place already.”

Bri reached into her pocket.

The purple and grey stone was there.

Cold now. Dull.

She pulled it out and stared at it.

Brian’s eyes widened. “You brought it with us?”

“I didn’t mean to.”

“That’s becoming a theme.”

Before Bri could answer, the hallway lights flickered violently.

For one second, she saw the corridor as it must have been years ago: clean floors, bright lockers, students moving between classes, teachers calling out instructions.

Then it changed.

The vision snapped away.

The hallway was abandoned again.

But now, at the far end, a girl stood watching them.

Bri froze.

The girl looked around their age, maybe a little older. Her hair hung messily around her face, and her clothes were stained with dust. She looked exhausted, terrified, and very much alive.

Brian moved in front of Bri slightly. “Who are you?”

The girl raised her hands quickly. “I’m not going to hurt you.”

“That’s what people say right before they hurt you,” Brian said.

“My name’s Elise,” she said. “I got lost here.”

Bri lowered the stone. “Lost how?”

Elise looked past them, down the dark hallway. “Same way everyone does. You find something you shouldn’t. You follow a sound. You open the wrong door.”

Brian glanced at Bri. “Sounds familiar.”

Bri ignored him. “What is this place?”

Elise swallowed.

“This is where Octavia Muleen lives.”

The name moved through the hallway like a draft.

The lockers rattled softly.

Bri felt the stone twitch in her hand.

Brian noticed. “Who’s Octavia Muleen?”

Elise looked at him as if he had asked the worst possible question.

“She was a student here,” Elise said quietly. “Or she is. Depends which version of the story you believe.”

Bri frowned. “Version?”

Elise nodded. “This place isn’t normal. It’s connected to other places. Other timelines. Other endings. Some people say Octavia died here. Some say she never did. Some say in this world, she survived what was supposed to kill her.”

Brian looked around the decaying hallway. “Lucky her.”

Elise shook her head. “No. Survival didn’t save her. It changed her.”

Bri tightened her grip on the stone.

An AU.

That was the only way she could understand it. They had been dragged into some alternate version of reality where Octavia Muleen lived, and this abandoned school had become her home.

Or her prison.

A loud bang echoed from somewhere above them.

All three of them flinched.

Elise whispered, “We have to move.”

Brian looked at Bri. “Can you walk?”

Bri nodded, even though her legs felt weak. “Yeah.”

They followed Elise down the hallway, stepping around broken glass and piles of ruined textbooks. Bri kept the stone hidden in her fist, but she could feel it warming again, pulsing faintly whenever they passed certain doors.

Classroom 104.

The cafeteria.

The nurse’s office.

Detention Room C.

When they reached that door, Elise stopped.

Brian almost ran into her. “Why are we stopping?”

Elise pointed.

The detention room door was covered in scratches.

Not random ones. Words.

Hundreds of them.

LET ME OUT.

SHE’S WATCHING.

DON’T TRUST THE BELL.

DETENTION NEVER ENDS.

And carved deeper than all the rest:

OCTAVIA LIVES.

Bri stepped closer.

The purple stone burned hot in her palm.

Inside the room, something shifted.

Brian grabbed her wrist. “No. We’re not opening the creepy detention door.”

“We might have to,” Bri said.

“We absolutely do not have to.”

Elise shook her head quickly. “He’s right. That room is where people disappear.”

Bri looked at her. “Then why did you bring us here?”

“I didn’t,” Elise said.

Her voice trembled.

Bri turned.
The hallway behind them was gone.

Where they had just walked, there was now a wall of lockers stretching from floor to ceiling.

Brian stared. “That’s new.”

Elise looked close to crying. “The school changes when she knows you’re here.”

Bri felt the air grow colder.

“She knows we’re here?”

Elise didn’t answer.

The intercom crackled overhead. Static hissed through the speakers.

Then a voice spoke.

Soft.

Female.

Almost amused.

“Students are reminded that leaving detention without permission is prohibited.”

Brian slowly looked up. “Please tell me that’s a recording.”

The voice continued.

“Bri. Brian. Elise.”

Bri’s stomach dropped.

Elise backed away from the door. “No. No, no, no…”

The intercom popped.

Then the voice whispered:

“And Brianna.”

Bri went still.

Brian turned to her. “Brianna?”

A second later, the lights went out.

The hallway plunged into darkness.

Someone grabbed Bri from behind. She tried to scream, but a gloved hand clamped over her mouth.

“Don’t,” a familiar distorted voice whispered in her ear.

Bri stopped struggling.
The emergency lights flickered on, bathing the hall in red.

Brianna stood behind her.

The future version of Bri still wore the cracked white mask.

Her hood was pulled low, and her clothes looked even more torn than before. She released Bri slowly and stepped back.

Brian stared at her, stunned. “What the hell?”

Brianna turned her masked face toward him. “Still asking that question?”

Brian’s expression shifted from fear to confusion. “Do I know you?”

“You will.”

Bri stepped between them. “Why are you here?”

Brianna looked at the detention door.

“Same reason you are,” she said. “The stone.”

Bri opened her hand.

The purple and grey stone was glowing now, brighter with every passing second.

Elise stared at Brianna’s mask. “You shouldn’t be here.”

Brianna’s head tilted. “Neither should you.”

Elise took a step back. “You know me?”

“I know what happens if you stay lost.”

Bri didn’t like the way she said that.

Brian pointed toward the blocked hallway. “Great. Since everyone here apparently knows everything, can someone explain how we get out?”

Brianna moved toward the detention room door. “We find the exit before Octavia decides to keep us.”

Elise shook her head. “There is no exit.”

“There is always an exit,” Brianna said. “It just usually costs something.”

Brian muttered, “That is not comforting.”

The intercom crackled again.

A school bell rang.

Not loud.

Not sudden. Slow. Dragging.

Like metal being scraped across bone.

Elise covered her ears. “Don’t listen to it.”

The bell kept ringing.

Bri felt dizzy. The hallway stretched in both directions even though one side had been sealed off moments ago. Doors appeared where there had been lockers. Shadows moved behind the frosted classroom windows.

And beneath the sound of the bell, Bri heard another noise.

The Operator’s ringing.

Faint.

Distant.

But present.

Brianna noticed her reaction. “You feel it too.”

Bri nodded. “The Operator is connected to this place.”

“No,” Brianna said. “Not to the place.”

She pointed at the stone.

“To that.”

Bri looked down at it.

The symbol flickered across the surface again.

Elise whispered, “Octavia found one of those years ago.”

Bri looked at her. “What happened?”

Elise’s face went pale.

“She stopped aging the right way. Stopped sleeping. Stopped leaving. The school started changing around her. People who came here got trapped in loops. Detention rooms. Empty classes. Bells that never stopped.”

Brian glanced around. “So, the stone did this?”

Elise shook her head. “The stone opened the door. Something else came through.”
The lights flickered.

At the far end of the newly stretched hallway, a figure appeared.

A girl.

Standing perfectly still.

She wore a ruined school uniform. Her long hair hung over one side of her face. Her skin looked almost grey beneath the fluorescent lights. She was barefoot, and her feet were blackened with dust.

Bri didn’t need anyone to tell her who it was.

Octavia Muleen.

She stood silently, watching them.
Then she smiled.

Elise whimpered. “Don’t look at her.”

Brian grabbed Bri’s hand. “Too late.”

Brianna stepped forward, placing herself between Octavia and the others.

For the first time, Bri saw fear in her future self.

Not panic. Recognition.

Octavia lifted one hand and pointed toward the detention room.

The door creaked open.

Inside was darkness.

Bri felt the stone pull toward it.

Brian tightened his grip on her hand. “We are not going in there.”

Brianna looked back at them. “We don’t have a choice.”

Bri shook her head. “There has to be another way.”

“There was,” Brianna said. “You missed it when you touched the stone.”

Octavia’s smile widened.

The intercom whispered:

“Detention begins now.”

The hallway shifted.

Lockers slammed open all at once.
Papers flew into the air.

A force yanked Bri forward, dragging her toward the open detention room.

Brian caught her around the waist, pulling back with everything he had.

“Bri!”

Brianna lunged and grabbed Bri’s other arm.

Elise hesitated, then ran forward and helped, gripping Bri’s sleeve and pulling hard.

The stone burned brighter.

Bri cried out as purple light spilled between her fingers.

The classroom door rattled.

Octavia laughed softly from the end of the hall.

Bri looked at Brianna. “What do I do?”

Brianna’s mask turned toward the stone. “Break the connection.”

“How?”

“Stop treating it like it belongs to him.”

Bri didn’t understand.

The force pulling her grew stronger.

Her shoes scraped across the floor. Brian shouted, Elise screamed, and Brianna held on like she was trying to pull Bri out of her own fate.

The Operator’s symbol flashed across the stone.

Then Bri saw something beneath it.

Another mark.

Not his.

Octavia’s.

A small carved shape like a broken school bell inside a circle.

The stone wasn’t only linked to The Operator.

It was linked to Octavia too.

To this school.

To every trapped hallway and every impossible detention.

Bri closed her fist around the stone and stopped pulling away.

Brian’s eyes widened. “Bri, what are you doing?”

“Trust me!”

“I hate when people say that!”

Bri faced the open detention room.

The darkness inside seemed endless.

She lifted the stone and shouted, “We’re not your students!”

The hallway shook.

Octavia’s smile vanished.

Bri raised the stone higher.

“And we’re not staying after school.”

The stone cracked.

Purple and grey light burst outward, flooding the hallway.

The force released her.

Brian, Brianna, and Elise all stumbled backward as the detention room door slammed shut so hard the frame splintered.

The bell stopped.

Silence crashed over them.

For a moment, no one moved.

Then Brian exhaled shakily. “Okay. That was… actually pretty good.”

Bri looked at the stone.

A thin crack now ran down its center.

But it was still glowing.

Still connected.

Still dangerous.

Brianna stared at it. “You weakened it.”

“Did I free us?” Bri asked.

Before Brianna could answer, Elise pointed behind them.

The wall of lockers was gone.

The hallway had returned.

At the far end, an exit sign flickered weakly.

Brian almost laughed. “Finally.”

But Bri didn’t move.

Octavia was gone.

That should have made her feel better.

It didn’t.

Because she could still feel eyes on her.

She turned slowly toward one of the classroom windows.

For a split second, she saw Octavia’s reflection in the glass, standing behind them with her head tilted and her lips parted in a silent whisper.

Then the reflection vanished.

Elise grabbed Bri’s arm. “We have to go before she changes her mind.”

Bri nodded.

Together, Bri, Brian, Brianna, and Elise ran down the hallway toward the flickering exit sign.

Behind them, the intercom crackled one last time.

Octavia’s voice slipped through the static, soft and patient.

“You can leave detention…”

The exit door burst open ahead of them, revealing nothing but purple-grey light.

Bri felt Brian grab her hand.

Brianna moved beside her.

Elise stumbled forward.

Octavia whispered:

“But detention always follows.”

They ran toward the light.
Not knowing what soon will come.

And somewhere in the abandoned school behind them?

Octavia Muleen watched.
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