The Crush

The Crush

This is a story dedicated to best friend whom I love so much! ChokolatLover. She helped me write a bit of the story but the rest I wrote. Anyways here's the plot: It's been one year since she's moved to Germany. After passing 7th grade, Antonia has started to crush on the Turkish guy, Cihan. She thought things would never change, that she was too young until she is paired up with Cihan on a trip to America. Will they start to like each other and date or will he just see her has a friend?

published on September 23, 2013104 reads 25 readers 3 not completed
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Chapter 5.
At school again

At school again

Cihan P.O.V
"And we danced all night to the best song ever, we knew every line now I can't remember how it goes but I know that I won't forget her cause we danced all night to the best song ever!  I think it went oh, oh, oh, I think it went yeah, yeah, yeah, I think it goes...." Her voice was beautiful and angelic. She was singing for Linda. I heard how she was in singing mode so now Antonia is a radio for Linda. Today Art was cancelled so we had nothing to do. I just sat there and laughed with my friends while Antonia is kept singing all the time. Then she stopped and I saw her chatting with Geena. I sat closer and tried hearing what they were saying. "So who's your dream guy?" Antonia asked. I didn't really care what Geena had to say so I didn't listen until.... "And you?" Antonia smiled. "I want him to have blonde or brown hair..." I have black hair. "And brown or blue eyes." Again black. "I want him to be funny and cute. Handsome and also romantic. He must also be adventurous and like to have fun." I thought for a moment. I'm funny, romantic, maybe cute, handsome? I don't know and adventurous? I don't know either. "Oh yeah he must be taller than me." That I already am. "And he must like me for who I am." I love her for who she is. They then talked about which boys they would date. When it was her turn, I heard my name and smiled the entire lesson. "Are you excited for the canoe trip?" She asked. I turned around to see her right behind me. "Yeah." "Cool. So the girls and I thought It'd be a good idea if we roomed with boys. Wanna come?" "I guess, yeah. Will you be there?" She bit her bottom lip. All I heard was huhuh which I took for a yes. "So it's you, Linda, Manuel, Sabrina, Niko and me." I froze at Niko's name. It was gonna be hard acting normal around him. "Cool." "Antonia? Did we have homework in German?" Niko asked. She turned and her smile grew bigger. "Yeah. I'll give it to you to copy." "Thanks." "No problem." She then headed to Jana. Ha, Jana. Can you believe it? Nobody likes Jana but I guess Antonia is a friendly person so she doesn't show it. She was talking a lot with Jana but I just shrugged it off.
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Oshsee
WOW!;)
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on April 26, 2015
Celestine
That is a great story!! It should really be a book! It took me a hour to read it but it was worth it! Great job!:D
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on November 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
Oh my gosh! Thanks Moonlight! When you told me to help you with a story. I didn't know it was about me lol! You changed the girls name! :) But I love it! Great beginning!
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on September 23, 2013