The Crush

The Crush

This is a story dedicated to best friend whom I love so much! ChokolatLover. She helped me write a bit of the story but the rest I wrote. Anyways here's the plot: It's been one year since she's moved to Germany. After passing 7th grade, Antonia has started to crush on the Turkish guy, Cihan. She thought things would never change, that she was too young until she is paired up with Cihan on a trip to America. Will they start to like each other and date or will he just see her has a friend?

published on September 23, 2013104 reads 25 readers 3 not completed
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Chapter 11.

The flight part 2

Cihan P.O.V
I watched her sleep. She looked so cute. I can't wait till she's mine. She breathed out, snoring softly. She had a sad expression on her face when I saw a tear fall from her eye. She was crying. I hugged her and she woke up, sad and hurt. "I miss them. I miss my friends Cihan." She said and I understood immediately. She loved South Africa. She loved her friends. "Let me call Linda." I stood up and looked everywhere till I saw her. I hit her arm and she yelped. "Sorry." "Hello! What you want?" Antonia." She ran to Antonia's seat while I stood there, probably looking stupid, thinking how fast Linda just got up. "Hey Cihan. What's up?" Niko was playing with his phone. "Nothing." "What's wrong with Antonia?" I didn't want to tell him because every time they're together, I feel jealous. "Nothing." He turned his phone off and got up. "If you're not gonna tell me, I'm going there myself." Before I could stop him, he was already gone. Great. I went to the bathroom and washed my face. I looked terrible. Hair flying everywhere, red eyes, how could she ever like me? As I went out, I saw Niko hugging Antonia. She was crying on his shoulders. Jealousy filled my heart and I hit him. "WTF??" He shouted so everyone on the plane could hear. "She doesn't need you. Leave." I coldly said. "She can speak for herself." Antonia stood up and pushed me away. "Cihan please." Was she seriously choosing him over me? He laughed and I couldn't help it, I punched him. When she saw this, she literally broke down. She kept crying, insulting me and helping Niko. "I see. I'm not wanted." I went away and the teacher was standing there, angry. "Cihan. Next to me now." I took my stuff and was about to leave when a hand grabbed mine. "Don't leave." Those words melted my heart. She wanted me to stay. I smirked and put my stuff back. "Mr. Chucholowksi, can he stay?" She gave him her puppy face which no one could resist. "As long as he doesn't hit anybody." He said. "Cross my heart, hope to die.." "Stick a cupcake in my eye." She finished and giggled. "Ok." I smiled and pulled her in a hug then she did something unexpected, she kissed my cheek. "You're so cute when you're jealous."
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Oshsee
WOW!;)
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on April 26, 2015
Celestine
That is a great story!! It should really be a book! It took me a hour to read it but it was worth it! Great job!:D
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on November 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
Oh my gosh! Thanks Moonlight! When you told me to help you with a story. I didn't know it was about me lol! You changed the girls name! :) But I love it! Great beginning!
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on September 23, 2013