One Afternoon in My Basement 1

One Afternoon in My Basement 1

one afternoon in my basement, i couldn't believe what i was seeing! it was soooo AHHH!!! wait, cant tell you. you have to read the story on your own. DUH!

published on September 11, 201340 reads 17 readers 9 not completed
Chapter 1.

one afternnon

one afternoon in my basement, i saw all of my clothing and work from school has been on the floor like carelessly! i yelled out to my mom. so she came down to see what was wrong. i said, "look at this place!" she stand silently for a few seconds. then, said, " well, you see, you have the biggest room in this house. and you've always wanted the biggest room. but you're the tiniest one in the family. we decided to give you the basement, it is big." i thought about how good of an idea it was. but then i knew it was a horrible idea. i like to keep my room to myself with locking the door. but how can i do that if THERE IS'NT ANY DOOR!!! I told my mom but she was not very understand.
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MockingjayDistrict
Is this true?
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on April 04, 2014
Bmac99
Cool
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on September 12, 2013
Bubblegirl2000
im making more of one afternoon in my basement stroies. next one is one afternoon in my basement 2
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on September 12, 2013
Bubblegirl2000
thanks that was the new one of the chapter i posted
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on September 12, 2013
nomnommoon
Like the bed part
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on September 12, 2013
Bubblegirl2000
ok the next one is coming up!
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on September 12, 2013
nomnommoon
Pretty good! You should make it exiting and have a mystery or something in it. But how the parents don't like their daughter is sad! Add more!!!
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on September 12, 2013
Bubblegirl2000
ok then... thought more people would like it. so i suggest you be more nice.
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on September 11, 2013
Dezdispenser10
Ok? I thought it was something more exciting! Disappointing story!
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on September 11, 2013