One Direction Fan Fiction

This is about me, sorry all you one direction lovers but you can substitute me for you if you want. I hope to add chapters as often as I can

published on August 31, 2013490 reads 38 readers 9 completed
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One Direction Fan Fiction
Chapter 19.
Chapter 19: The hospital

Chapter 19: The hospital

Louis P.O.V.
I was waiting outside of her house. I had rang the door bell but her parents said she wasn't home, so I called her phone. She picked up on the second ring.
"Where are you?" I asked. There was some hurt in my voice. I heard a scream through the phone. Whatever was happing was not good. Then I heard a couple of words. something about Scott and a house. Then help. I knew where he lived. She had to be there so I drove off. I got there and heard a big crash. I reached the front door but it was locked. I didn't have time for this so I kicked the door in. There was shattering somewhere and then I could hear a car roaring to life and driving away. I ran around the house searching for Taylor. I stumbled upon her in what looked like Scotts room. What I saw was not pretty. There was blood everywhere, something wooden had fallen on her and was crushing her right arm and leg. I pulled out my phone and called 911.
"911 what's your emergency."
"Hi. I'm at Eastglen 46 on Maglegate. There is a girl that I love her and she is dying. Please help."
"Ok. I want you to stay calm. If there is bleeding then try to stop it, just try to help her. Help is on the way." and the line went dead. I tried to lift the dresser off of her but it wouldn't budge so I took off my jacket and wrapped it around her bleeding leg. Wow a whole slice along the calf. I inspected the rest of her. Her wrist was bleed too so I tore up my shirt and wrapped it up. She had a cut on her face but that wasn't too bad. I stared at her face. Even with blood all over it and the paleness of her skin she was still beautiful. If only she knew about our feelings..... I heard the sirens coming. Suddenly there were doctors and policemen here. They were carrying her away from me. I ran to catch up. They put her in an ambulance and I climbed in. They weren't going fast enough. I didn't think she could lose more color or blood but it was fleeing fast. I texted the guys.
Group text: Harry, Liam, Zayn, and Niall.
On way to hospital with Taylor. Think Scott hurt her. Needs help. Bring some clothes for me please and hurry. Btw: she's unconscious and looks bad.
I hit send. They all replied automatically. I didn't look at the text because we got to the hospital. They wheeled her into an emergency room. I had to wait in the waiting area. The guys showed up 20 minutes later with some clothes and some things to do. We waited and waited. Niall left to get food, Harry fell asleep in the chairs and I got on twitter. Liam and Zayn just sat quietly with grim faces.
"Would you like to see Taylor?" a nurse spoke. "Only three at a time." We all looked at Harry, asleep, and Niall's empty chair and stood up. She took us to her room
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Jewels45
Its Okay
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on January 25, 2014
ChokolatLover
And your story :p
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on October 04, 2013
ChokolatLover
Thanks for the shoutout :) I love you sista!
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JKRowling
Thx Girl. You should update yours. I love reading it
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on June 25, 2014
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on October 04, 2013
hannahlovestommo
amazing. maybe Naill comes back and explains that she's having a child? good though!
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on September 29, 2013
SilentKelsey15
It is pretty good I'll admit :) I like it nice work :)
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on September 02, 2013
JKRowling
the story's not over until I write The End and there is a happy ending
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on August 31, 2013
ChokolatLover
It's a lovely story, did that really happen? If not, it doesn't matter but I wish that happened to me! :)
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on August 31, 2013
JKRowling
please tell me what you think even if you think its bad
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on August 31, 2013