One Direction Fan Fiction

This is about me, sorry all you one direction lovers but you can substitute me for you if you want. I hope to add chapters as often as I can

published on August 31, 2013490 reads 38 readers 9 completed
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One Direction Fan Fiction
Chapter 14.
Chapter 14: Liam 2

Chapter 14: Liam 2

We returned our equipment and left.
"Ok so its about 10 and we need to be somewhere by 3. What do you want to do?" he asked me.
We were just driving around when I said, "Let's go to that fair over there. Please." He nodded eagerly.
He walked into a line. I didn't realize what it was until we were on. It was the Farris wheel. I couldn't tell him I was afraid of heights because it was to late.
"AHHH!" I screamed and closed my eyes.
"Oh my gosh are you afraid of heights? its ok if you are." he asked. All I could do was nod. He pulled me into his arms.
"Just look into my eyes and only my eyes." he said.
"Umm no thanks. That means looking up and opening my eyes."
"haha why not. My eyes are very attractive or so I've been told."
"I'm sure they are but I'm not going to look." I defied. He put his hand on my chin and slowly lifted my eyes onto his. They were pretty. His eyes sparkled like the stars at their brightest on a cloudless night. He must have been looking at mine too because he said, "You have prettiest eyes. So captivating. They scream mysterious, danger, and sweet. They long attention. Let me give you that attention." I blushed. I looked away but shrieked again. Why is this so high? He held me again and told me it would be ok. That's when he saw the charm bracelet.
"There's no time like the present." He pulled out a little red box wrapped with golden ribbon. I opened it and it reveled another charm. He placed it next to the microphone.
I looked at it. It was a picture of him, Niall had given me one of him last night. I stayed in his arms until we were let off on the ground. I went to the restroom and when I came out Liam we handing me some ice cream! I took it and instantly got it on my face. He laughed and did the same. We took pictures and got some napkins. He whipped my face clean.
Liam lead me back to our table and took my ice cream. He spoon fed me claiming it would keep me clean. We took a walk and came across some games. He found one of those test your strength ones.
"I'm going to win you one of those bears." after 20 times of coming close I asked why he was still playing.
"You deserve a big bear." he said. I gave him a peck on the cheek. He blushed and the meter went all the way up. He handed me the biggest bear there was.
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Jewels45
Its Okay
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on January 25, 2014
ChokolatLover
And your story :p
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on October 04, 2013
ChokolatLover
Thanks for the shoutout :) I love you sista!
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JKRowling
Thx Girl. You should update yours. I love reading it
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on June 25, 2014
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on October 04, 2013
hannahlovestommo
amazing. maybe Naill comes back and explains that she's having a child? good though!
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on September 29, 2013
SilentKelsey15
It is pretty good I'll admit :) I like it nice work :)
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on September 02, 2013
JKRowling
the story's not over until I write The End and there is a happy ending
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on August 31, 2013
ChokolatLover
It's a lovely story, did that really happen? If not, it doesn't matter but I wish that happened to me! :)
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on August 31, 2013
JKRowling
please tell me what you think even if you think its bad
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on August 31, 2013