One Direction Fan Fiction

This is about me, sorry all you one direction lovers but you can substitute me for you if you want. I hope to add chapters as often as I can

published on August 31, 2013490 reads 38 readers 9 completed
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One Direction Fan Fiction
Chapter 11.
Chapter 11: Niall 2

Chapter 11: Niall 2

We started with a ride called Bamboozler. You spin around and it also tilts you. Then we tried out a roller-coaster called Wild Fire. I was really nervous so he gave me a kiss and we climbed on into the first row.
The first drop can way to fast for me. I wasn't ready. I want off. I screamed really loud but stopped on the second one. I hadn't realized that Niall was screaming the first time and now I could hear him clearly. His scream is really loud and ear splitting.
"Were you scared?" I asked once it was over. He looked at me and tried to act though but we both ended up laughing at him. We rode two more times and then got off.
We took turns giving each other piggy back rides as we went to the next one. We went on a water ride in a log. He sat behind me and pulled me close. He held onto me the whole time. I ended up getting soaked. The ride ended and we got off. He held out his hand to help me up.
"Here let me help you. Oh my gosh! you got soaked. Her have my jacket" He pulled his hoodie off and wrapped it around me. He pulled me to the next ride. Along the way I tripped and fell into him.
"I guess you are falling for me."
"I guess I am!" I replied.
The next ride was a roller-coaster and we sat in front again. I started to regret in once I saw how high it went.
"Um I don't think we should've sat in the front. I'm afraid of heights." I said. He put his arm around me and I snuggled into him as close as the restraints would let me. We went down the first drop and I screamed my heart out. I closed my eyes and hoped it would be over soon.  Niall laughed at me and pretty soon I was laughing too. Suddenly he leaned in close and kissed me. It was for the picture. He bought two of them.
"Wow I actually look good in the picture!!" I exclaimed.
"That's an understatement and I bet you always look amazing."
"Well you always look phenomeNiall!!!!" I told him. His stomach rumbled really loud.
"Haha. Last one to the restaurant buys." I raced him but I tripped when we got close. He beat me there. We ordered and sat down. Ummmm good food!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jewels45
Its Okay
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on January 25, 2014
ChokolatLover
And your story :p
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on October 04, 2013
ChokolatLover
Thanks for the shoutout :) I love you sista!
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JKRowling
Thx Girl. You should update yours. I love reading it
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on June 25, 2014
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on October 04, 2013
hannahlovestommo
amazing. maybe Naill comes back and explains that she's having a child? good though!
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on September 29, 2013
SilentKelsey15
It is pretty good I'll admit :) I like it nice work :)
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on September 02, 2013
JKRowling
the story's not over until I write The End and there is a happy ending
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on August 31, 2013
ChokolatLover
It's a lovely story, did that really happen? If not, it doesn't matter but I wish that happened to me! :)
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on August 31, 2013
JKRowling
please tell me what you think even if you think its bad
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on August 31, 2013