I made the wrong chose !

I made the wrong chose !

this story is a thriller not suttabile for under 7 year olds it is about a girl who fell in love with a vampire and werewolf and they asked her out and they did not show up and then the next thing u know she went missing please read this shocking story

published on December 10, 2012137 reads 45 readers 8 completed
Chapter 1.
The date

The date

Introduction
It was another hard day at high school it was a dark gloomy sight . There was a beautiful girl called Victoria bell she was 17 years old and she was that beautifurl everybody had a huge crush on her . There was two new boys in school called derek dawson and tyler red victoria had a lil crush on derek and tyler that she started flirting with them. Everybody else thought there were something mysterious about them .

Chapter 1 the date
tyler walked into victoria and asked her on a date to american suprise and victoria said yes of course what time ? and tyler said 8 : 00 pm approxmaitly yes and she said yes . A couple of minuetes later she bumped into derek but he like to call himself the depressed one and then he asked her on a date to american suprise too but she didint tell him she had got plans and she aceppeted but they had to go at 8 : 00 pm too but she forgot she was going there with tyler at that time so she went home and got ready . She was  home but there was something unusal going on she kept seeing this creepy shadow following her but she didint worry . She got changed into a badge and brown dress and made her way too the resturant .
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Lapis10for
Could be better
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on August 05
foreverinpink
good, but heaps of grammatical errors good tho
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on May 25, 2015
XxlunargirlxX
Boring... (yawns)
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on June 27, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
to much like twilight oh does it count im 8
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on December 20, 2013
potterpox
BBAAHHH to much like twilight
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on January 04, 2013
Clove
Maybe a little to much like twilight?!
It was good, just extend it a bit and add in some full stops!
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on December 11, 2012
xKearax
It's a little like twilight
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on December 10, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
WOW that story was..... AWESOME xD
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on December 10, 2012