What could've been

What could've been

Its about a girl who was lied to her whole life and she finds out her parents arent really her parents when Her birth Mother shows up.

published on August 14, 201336 reads 15 readers 16 not completed
Chapter 1.

Where it all started

Hi. Nice to meet you all and hope you enjoy the story.Its partially based on facts some stuff has been changed.

Hi Im Lynni!, I wanted to tell you all my story because I've found out something that has changed my entire world.Where do i begin?Oh,Ok Ill start here.At the age of 8 I found out that my parents were not mine because I was adopted,I was taken from my mother when i was 3 years old.I hardly remember her though.After she showed up and wanted to see me i was scared because I didn't know her and had only heard bad things about her so i was hesitant to bring her name up and ask questions about her.Even though I sometimes wondered why i looked different from my family I felt something was missing.Now i have evne more questions but scared to ask them because my "mom" seems to get angry when i bring it up.
You see growing up I had every materialistic thing i could want but was angry because i felt something was missing..It was my mother,The real one!.

* next chapter you all will hear from Lynn mother and her thoughts on this matter and what she says "what Could've been"
* if you all could give Lynn any advice about how to handle her situation what would it be?
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Comments (16)

Pinki1125
To Anyone who has read this story.Please know that this was NOT written to hurt anyone or to put others down It was written with a purpose and only meant to be the other side of the story. i am truly sorry if anyone got mad or hurt because of it.Hopefully all comments below willbe read and aybe an understanding can be reached. Thank You all, Pinki1125
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on August 16, 2013
Serenity_Jade
XxRainbow_DashxX..Sorry if I did anything wrong.
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
the years have passed and can never be reclaimed all in all a mother in shame from what shes done & wheres shes been the only thing shes focused on is gettin to know her lilttle one again
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
ok Just know that the moral of the entire story & point me of the story is She wants to know her child even though the probably hates her as it seems but the mother is truly sorry for her actions and not being strong enough to stand up for her child when given the chance..Shes not asking for anything but to get to know her thats it unless the child wants more See More▼
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
thats your opinion & your entitled.
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
ok an asshole i will be,The capitalizing is only emphasis on the importance of those words!!
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
The MOTHER only wants a chance to know her child and let her child know that she takes FULL RESPONSIBILTY for her past actions & to show her child that shes CHANGED!!!
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
@ SOUTHPARKYAOI you are right but the mother the MOTHEr made mistakes as most KIDS/TEENAGERS do!! its not told to be for sympathy its told bc the story needs to be heard from all & not just the FAMILY the CHIld has been around!
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
thats easy for you to say! And maybe the child feels the same way But growing up WITHOUT a FATHER & a mother on drugs I KNOW the srtuggles ONE GOES THRU!!
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
it was easier then BUT AFTER BEING LOCKED UP SHE HAS CHANGED!!!!! and NEVER EVER HAS she GIVEN UP ON HER CHILD SHE GAVE UP ON HERSLEF BACK THEN but is trying to make things RIGHT now if given the CHANCE!!!!
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
Most of the drugs were from her own family members or she hustled to get the money & was tired of hurting so she got high to deal with it..NOT BECAUSE SHE NEVER CARED FOR HER CHILD!!!
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on August 15, 2013
Serenity_Jade
Whoa! this story has made me cry!! How could someone say that a mother is worthless and doesnt want their child?? I bet she still loves her daughter and just has no way to show it
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
Thanx XxRainbow_DashxX
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
i dont see the option so can i just write it here in the comments??
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
hahahaa ON THE FLOOR LAUGHING!!IKR!!
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on August 15, 2013
Pinki1125
Its true!! Come on I know you've thought it couple of times huh!!
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on August 15, 2013