Softstar's Path

Softstar's Path

Every cat needs to follow a path. But a cat without of prophecy to guide, a cat free to live as she desires. A cat who is Softstar.

published on July 29, 201340 reads 14 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 4.

Chapter Four

  “Let all cats who can catch their own prey come beneath the highrock!”

    Softkit trotted through the cats, beaming brightly. Meadowkit followed her, walking cooly.

    “Oh my gosh, Meadowkit’s going to be an apprentice!” Firepaw squealed. “We are going to train together every day!”

    Meadowkit make a yech noise before he sat at the foot of the highrock.

    “Meadowkit, do you promise to uphold to warrior code for as long as you live?”

    “I do,” Meadowkit purred.

    “Then from this moment forth, you shall be known as Meadowpaw. StarClan honors your wiliness and justice. Cherryfur shall be your mentor.”

    The pretty ginger she-cat nuzzled Meadowpaw’s nose. He ducked his head, hot with embarrassment.

    “Softkit.” Softkit sat up straight. “Do you promise to uphold to warrior code as long as you live?”

    “I do.”

    “Then from this morning on, you shall be known as Softpaw. StarClan honors your courage and loyalty with this name. Maplenose will be your mentor.”

    Maplenose trotted forward and brushed his muzzle on her’s. She wanted to purr out loud. She only drew back when she spotted Meadowpaw’s bitter stare.



    Later that night, in the apprentice den, Briarlight’s kits were talking.

    “Can you believe that she got One-eye for a mentor?” Lakepaw meowed.

    “Yes, they’ve been mooning over each other for moons,” Mosspaw purred.

    “It isn’t that surprising, really,” Mintpaw said softly.

    “I can’t wait to see their kits,” Darkpaw said.

    There was a silence.

    “I know One-eye likes her,” Stormpaw meowed. “But Softpaw will never love such an ugly cat.”

    The cats began laughing, and to her despair, so was Meadowpaw.

    Softpaw did not sleep well that night.


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Comments (5)

Rainbow_Bird
Make more make more plea plea plea this is really good!!
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on January 26, 2014
Estonia
Okay, but i should mention; ive prewritten the first 20 chapters. Ill add them in later.
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on August 12, 2013
PowerOfThree
Can Bravepaw be in it? She is a tuxedo cat with blue eyes. She is teased to death for being Cuteflower's only kit. She is brave on the inside, but a timid shell has formed over moons of being teased. She is kind and will do anything to protect those who don't tease her. Her warrior name is Braveheart.
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on August 12, 2013
Estonia
Okay, 2 :), ill keel going!
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on August 04, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
Great!
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on August 04, 2013