Sneak Peek-

Sneak Peek-

This is the sneaky preview of my new ghost story it will be removed once the story is fully published on here!

published on July 29, 20138 reads 8 readers 5 not completed
1946

1946

The war ended a year ago Mary Goodwin sat on the hills near to her home in the country somewhere in England. She could not have seen or known her killer was standing right behind her or surely she would have tried to stop her murder but as she felt the bullet hit her head there was nothing she could do about it. Well at least not until 1991 when  maybe just maybe she might be able to get revenge on not her killer but his family...





Thank you for reading the sneak peek at the new ghost story I am writing if you wait for the end of the week it should be finished by then so you can read the whole story.
I still haven't decided on a name or the ending but I have a pretty good idea of where I'm going with this!
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Comments (5)

Mary_chan
i saw "killer" and i was like jeeeeeefff!!!! xo
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on July 30, 2013
Clove
It sounds really good, I'll definitely read it when you post it!! :)
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on July 29, 2013
Clove
Mary's Revenge or The Revenge of Mary Goodwin
?? I'm not that good at names either!!
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on July 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
Revenge: the story of a desperate girl
Revenge or something with revenge:
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on July 29, 2013
purplepony3
Please comment an idea for a name cause I really suck at naming my stories before iv finished them!
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on July 29, 2013