Say goodbye,Doctor Whooves.

Say goodbye,Doctor Whooves.

This is not real I just wached some sad mlp vids and thought up a quick fanfic... I'm creative like that. WARNING: this might give you unwanted feels or maybe even make you cry. If your not into ponies then WHY THE HELL YOU READING THIS?!

published on July 26, 201360 reads 29 readers 7 completed
Chapter 1.
She's Dead... NO!

She's Dead... NO!

The Doctor and Ditzy Doo just went on a terrible adventure. Ditzy had one of her wings cut off, the other wing was misplaced, her head was bleeding, and she coughed blood. The Doc, on the other hand, er, hoof was fine. He was carrying Ditzy on his back. Ditzy was sat down next to him as he set the counculations for a hospital. Ditzy asked, "Doctor, do you think there is a heaven?" The Doctor knew why she was asking that. He just answered, "Miss Hooves, I don't usually beleive in that stuff but if I did, I'd say yes. Yes, there is a heaven Ditzy." Ditzy said, "That's good", and just stayed quiet. Doctor didn't want her to die, just like all of his other companions. He was ashamed of himself for not protecting her better. He stood there having terrorising flashbacks. He snapped out of it, and lookd at Ditzy. "You're gonna be perfectly fine, I know it." Ditzy didn't beleive him, she knew what was gonna happen. This was her chance to tell him. She said, "Doctor, can I tell you something?" The Doctor said she could if she wanted to. He knew she was thinking she was gonna die. That's why she was telling him something important. "Well", Ditzy said, "I love you..." The Doctor just stood there with his jaw dropped for a second and then he said "Well, that's interesting... because I kinda had the same secret." Ditzy coulodn't beleive it! So then, she closed her eyes, and died happy. The Doctor said "Miss Hooves, please tell me you're sleeping... Ditzy? No... NOOOOOOOOO!"
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DoctorWhoFanGirl
That was very sad I love depry and she died
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on February 13, 2014
cady213
Now that I look back on the story, I realize I made it sound kinda akward and bad-worded and stuff, but in my offense, this was my first story attempted. It has been like, 4 months since I've made it.
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on November 24, 2013
cady213
Oh gawd the "learn to say goodbye cheesy story"
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on November 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
Good story
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on August 14, 2013
ChokolatLover
Wait is ditzy, derpy?
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on August 14, 2013
cady213
Wait... NVM, the other account is gone!
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on July 30, 2013
DoctorWhoovesAndDerpy
Doctor Whooves and Derpy:WHAT...
Cady213: (trollface)
Cady213: I made another account, this is the account!
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on July 30, 2013