Mobian Girls

Mobian Girls

Camille and her companion assistant, Wolfie discovers a magical mirror that transfer them to a planet Earth, where humans roam. There, she meets her humanized friends and a wicked teenage wreckage, named Kameo, who always finds ways to destoy the life of Camille.

published on February 27, 2015131 reads 25 readers 33 not completed
Chapter 1.

Stolen crown (Part 1)

Camille: Ah, sunny day, happy citizens and NO drama. Just the way I like it! Hey Wolfie, got the bag?
Wolfie: *Helping to carry Camille's load, sweltering such a river* Yeah...*Heaves* at your service, queen.
Camille: You don't have to call me that! You're my best friend! I won't feel disrespected if I'm called by my name!
Wolfie: *Drops the bag eagerily* Are you kidding! That means I have to serve you X2 the hours!
Camille: *Walks off, giggling lightly*
Wolfie: *Continues to pull Camille's bag*

Shara comes skipping happily along with Swift, Lana, Sky, and Griffin.
Shara: LOOK EVERYONE, THE QUEEN! *Bowing* OH HAIL QUEEN CAMILLE!
Camille: Um?...
Griffin: Sup? Heard the news.
Swift: Yeah, girl! You're a freaking queen! You're pretty fit for the job!
Lana: You're not gonna take over mobius, are you?
Camille: NO!
Griffin: Yeah, Lana, shes totally not gonna be one those queens..
Shara: OR IS SHE?! *Does the I'm-watching-you sign to Camille*
Camille: O_O
Swift: Don't mind her, she can be er- *Does coo-coo sign*
Shara: I HEARD THAT!
Swift: -__- You see what I mean?
Sky: CAMMY! Your crown! *Super dramatic* Some one CALL the COPS!
Camille: Its in my bag...
Wolfie: *Happily pats bag with paw*
Sky: .......Oh, nevermind! ^-^
Griffin: *Facepalm* Ugh... -__-
Lana: I heard that you're moving.
Griffin: Yeah! Whats all that about?
Camille: Oh, that? Yeah, I was hoping to move anyways...
Wolfie: Muskrats...YUCK!
*Everyone glares at Wolfie*
Wolfie: *Nervous chuckle and continues to pull bag along*
Griffin: We were gonna hang tonight at the skating ring. Wanna come?
Camille: I wish I could but...I have plenty of work to do at my new palace.
Wolfie: I can do it for you! I don't mind having dust in my fur and all!
Camille: I don't want you to hurt yourself...
Wolfie: *Lowers ears and whimpers*
Griffin: Alright, your choice! Come on, girls! Lets leave egghead!
Shara: YEAH, EGGHEAD!

*Friends walk away*
Camille: Shara...gotta learn to love her randomness...
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LostBoy
:d
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on June 26, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
This is amazing! I haven't read a story this funny for ages XD
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on May 18, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Awesome!!!
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on March 19, 2015
ChristinaTheHedgehog
Oh wow cool!
When am I appearing?
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Obese_Doggo_boi
Soon!
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ChristinaTheHedgehog
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 14, 2015
XxSad_Little_LionxX
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
XD
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Obese_Doggo_boi
Yep, So Wolfie's a hamster! And Tails just told Camille off. XD
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Idk I can't really decide
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on March 06, 2015
Obese_Doggo_boi
BTW, what was the best part?
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Oh hell yes
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on March 06, 2015
Obese_Doggo_boi
@SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
You love puns, do you?
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
I have a feeling sh*ts about to get real! (Pun intended)
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on March 06, 2015
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XxSad_Little_LionxX
Awesome I wonder what Shara gonna be like X3 when cam tell her(cam's)that her crown is missing!
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Obese_Doggo_boi
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Lol. Love the new chap!
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Obese_Doggo_boi
Its not boring? I was even bored writing it!
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AlwaysBeInfinite
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on March 03, 2015
Obese_Doggo_boi
You already know that I play Spike, right?
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on March 03, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Nah! I enjoyed it!
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on March 03, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
Such an amazing story!
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Obese_Doggo_boi
Thanks.
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gothicskittlescupcake
Your welcome!
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
XxSad_Little_LionxX
Yes!!!!!!!X3 Shara is so random!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT SO!!!!!!!
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on March 01, 2015
ChristinaTheHedgehog
LOL!
Guessing I'm not in this yet because I'm in Scorchia?
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Obese_Doggo_boi
yeah.
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Obese_Doggo_boi
I'm thinking of a good cameo appearance.
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on February 28, 2015
ChristinaTheHedgehog
LOL okay.
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!
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on February 27, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Love it!
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Obese_Doggo_boi
Thanks, sorry for the delay, I was trying to find a good start of the story.
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Nah! Don't kill yourself over it! Its an awesome start!
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