Fading out

Fading out

i wrote this poem because i thought that kids my age would be able to relate with feeling left behind.

published on July 23, 20139 reads 9 readers 7 completed

Fading out

I’m running, running trying to keep up behind, trying to keep up with everyone; friends and family but their all so far ahead, I’m stumbling my hands are outstretched towards them, but I can’t keep up I’m running as fast as my feet can carry me watching with awe as everyone I’ve ever known fades into the darkness, I’m alone again walking along the faded path it’s dark, and cold. I’m lonely, I stop and rest maybe I’ll catch the next person who walks by, maybe they’ll take me with them, to tomorrow. I just hope they come quickly because I can feel myself slipping away; I’m fading out; I want to get to tomorrow but for now I’m stuck in today.
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Bmac99
Really good:)
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on July 24, 2013
vintagebird
That's mean
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on July 24, 2013
Jaytheangel
Great too bad my stories are better, but better realistic
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on July 23, 2013
vintagebird
YOU REALLY SHOULD BECOME A WRITER!!!!!
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on July 23, 2013
vintagebird
THIS IS SO GREAT!!!!! But I don't feel like this a home, but maybe sometimes at school....? Cuz I can be really shy
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on July 23, 2013
bunnyboo13
im so happy! I feel the same way around my family! this is exactly wat I wanted! for my poems to connect with people's feelings! im glad that my poem could touch u in sucha way:D
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on July 23, 2013
Mary_chan
Thats how i feel everyday of my life.. im very different from my family and can be really lonely. This poem is truely beautiful that it has touched the true essence of my soul.
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on July 23, 2013